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“Soon”, I said, knowing probably never; “Maybe later, after it’s way better weather”. “Stop bugging me - I said, soon,” are the words I repeated, “After you give me the five minutes of peace that I’ve needed!” Not one minute passes and they’re asking again, “Ask one more time and it’s never, my friend!” I should never have mentioned the possibility, That all of the kids could someday go there with me. “I don’t know how soon soon is – it might be today; It could be in a month or a good year away.” “But one thing is sure, it will never arrive, If you keep on pestering - on that, please rely.” “So think of something else that all of you can do Instead of asking that stupid question every minute or two.” “As soon as soon finally gets here I’ll let you all know And no sooner than that will be the day that we go.” “So that word you keep asking, which I will not repeat, Won’t get soon here sooner – so the ask, please delete.” They walked away sad, with a slink and a mope, But without asking again – for an entire day, I can hope. And as soon as they give up on it ever arriving - Soon will arrive and there we’ll be driving.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/12/2011 1:22:00 PM
are we there yet! Haven't all parents been through this LOL congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:53:00 PM
I like this "time is of the essence" piece. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:54:00 AM
A very fine write on this theme "when". Congrats Joe on your super win in this contest..gautami
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:04:00 PM
Congrats Joe on 1st place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/4/2011 8:10:00 AM
I like this poem. Did you win? Congratulation :)
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Date: 5/3/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/3/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st Place win, Joe. Very clever, well written piece. Don't know "when" (oops!) I've seen a more deserving win. Kudos. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations....KQQL
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:22:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your fantastic first place in Paula's contest .. amazing lines relating to 'when'..hope all is much better for u now my friend... always in my thoughts and prayers luv.
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Date: 5/3/2011 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Joe in Paula's "When" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:50:00 AM
A great piece. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:01:00 AM
super toppers, joe.. congrats on the big win; an unorthodox way of expressing the unsayable..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:10:00 PM
Super congrats on your first place win, Joe! You definitely skirted around this question so well, really enjoyed reading this! I hope you will be more active here soon :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win, Joe! Good idea you used for the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/2/2011 8:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Joe. Enjoy your first place win.
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Date: 5/2/2011 8:26:00 PM
How perfectly you scooted around the word "when!" Excellent win, Joe....welcome back to the winners circle...we've missed you!!! :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 8:21:00 PM
You have taken this contest theme to great heights. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/1/2011 10:07:00 AM
Hi Joe-I think this is great fun and a bit reminiscent of that other phrase tomorrow never comes!Found it witty and clever.A favourite funny for me.Thank you for the laugh.Love June(sylvia)
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Date: 4/30/2011 4:52:00 PM
Nice tongue in cheek, Joe. I enjoyed this cute poem. Right now we have the grandkids living with us and our daugher and her hubby. I simply do not understand why they must be running for an hour overhead me like elephants in our house. It really worries me becuase my hubbie has a short temper and he is napping.haha. How I hope they get a house!!
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Date: 4/30/2011 3:02:00 AM
It is a true tomorrow tale. Brings back some funny memories.
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