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Sonnet:How Far Will I Love You

My cherished one How far will I love you As far as where moons dissolve in deep seas Beyond the edge of a tide's crimson hue where your breath quickens sails with fevered breeze. Alone I'll embark to our promised land across long borders of unending pain Under fading stars above drifting sand through anchored shadows of persisting rain. Oh those foreign eyes yet not so distant Your arms safe harbour of a warm embrace Two hearts entwine against odds resistant Neath' plum fog sky my lips outline your face. Water rises 'tween silent hope and time But water falls and I will make you mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/3/2017 10:58:00 PM
All through you maintained the passion. Nice read.
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Date: 11/28/2016 4:38:00 PM
Nice. I can just see the image of the line.. Under fading stars above drifting sand
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Date: 11/19/2016 9:22:00 AM
Enthralling sonnet. 'Neath' plum fog sky my lips outline your face' love that!
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Date: 11/14/2016 4:38:00 PM
A smile of Beauty: aletheia.
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Date: 11/2/2016 5:14:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful. A reflection of yourself.
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Date: 11/2/2016 2:10:00 PM
Wonderful piece lovely meter!
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:07:00 PM
Reminds me of this "I would climb the highest mountain for you, I would crawl across the hottest desert for you, I would sail the stormiest seas for you, I would battle a herd of wild boar just to be with you, I would conquer the mightiest army, to be with you, but I can’t come over tonight, it’s raining out!"
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Date: 11/2/2016 3:01:00 PM
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Date: 10/28/2016 2:59:00 PM
This is so beautiful and sweet Charmaine!
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Date: 10/28/2016 2:07:00 AM
This is an enchanting sonnet, Charma. As always...your words speak of enduring love and constancy. Beautiful, dear one. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/26/2016 8:51:00 AM
An ocean of romance that the soul could drink for to quench its thirst dear, Charmaine! Good luck! A seven
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Date: 10/25/2016 10:19:00 PM
So romantic Charmaine. A beautiful sonnet. I'm with Tim on this one. The form suits you well.
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Date: 10/25/2016 5:08:00 PM
Another beautifully mesmerizing piece that so vividly expresses how far one will go for the one they love. This is what many would love to hear, that they matter, thy matter so much that someone is willing to do most anything to secure their love.
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Date: 10/25/2016 5:00:00 PM
Echoes of Elizabeth Barrett Browning...very nice read and good luck in contest
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Date: 10/25/2016 3:29:00 PM
Very beautiful. I love the plum sky image. Nice to see you branching out into sonnets. The love form fits you.
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