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Sonnet To Doubt

Thinking of you my mind crashes, in a way I can’t understand at all. My thoughts just become ashes, before you I stand in my deep fall. I don’t comprehend what you say, my ears are deaf to your clear voice. Or is it you that can’t pronounce, and what I hear is my only choice. No matter what I do I pain to death, reading the explanations I am blind, and hearing them I shiver till I part. But God knows I tried till my last breath, that what I had for you was not in mind, but deeply inside my poor and lonely heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2011 7:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear friends! I never thought my poem would be featured one day and I am so happy.
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Manoel
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:41:00 AM
Congrats on being featured. Nice expression and passion. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 3/21/2011 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Manoel. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:35:00 AM
A decently written poem. You are off to a good start on this site. Welcome, I know you will like it here.
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