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Sonnet Iv

Fleeting moments suspended in freezing air, One-sided passion burning like a cigarette, A taste of feigned innocence and feigned lack of care Moving to the music of dreams we will soon forget. So tell me now; kiss the bottle and spin the girl. Our lips show off the unsecrets they know about And greedily caress inspired skin, unfurl A thousand fleshy rose petals and what's left out: Our sins in ashes of our bodies, smoldering Coals in retrospect. Dance in the flames that consume Our thoughts and actions-a distant sense of folding, A closer sense of cloud cover: impending doom. Our bodies touch, they bloom, and quickly they will wilt Upon the gravestones of the emotions we killed. "Sonnet IV" Jenna-Nichole Conrad Wordsmith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! And Christopher, thank you. You can totally write poems like this, poetry is all about experimenting. Write what you feel, you can always make it pretty later. Sonnets are easy(ish), depending on what type you write. This is an English/Shakespearean Sonnet, kinda a free-verse(ish) Sonnet. I can teach you, if you'd like, I'm not the greatest Poet floating around, but I think I have a basic grasp on it ^^
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Date: 4/29/2012 8:50:00 AM
nice poem i liked it alot i wish i could write poems like this i don't know the different structures of poems
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Date: 4/28/2012 1:54:00 PM
Wish you all the best, well done Jenna-Nichole. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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