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Sonnet From the Porch On Geese

Sonnet From the Porch.. on Geese Why linger still upon an ice bound pond lone feathered symbol huddled warm and dry dine upon the fresh sweet sprouting frond unable to assault the fleeing sky. Bloodline circle beckons join the draft can nature’s simple truth become undone weary wings abandon ageless craft passing on the future to the young. I cannot travel with them all their days nor burden gaggle with slow flapping wings while longing for the feel of old sun rays watch as they depart for future springs Thus rendered faster in their flight seeking out their day and I my night. John G. Lawless

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Date: 4/15/2014 6:16:00 AM
John, I don't think I had asked you before. I've been rereading these sonnets. I would like to include yours in my textbook along with the others, if you have no objection.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/15/2014 2:56:00 PM
Karen, I would consider it an honor to have you include this poem in you textbook. John
Date: 3/14/2014 6:20:00 PM
Good connection with nature John, the geese remind us of the seasons.
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:06:00 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congrats on the win, john
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Date: 2/1/2014 10:53:00 PM
It reminds me of an old bird unable to fly with the rest of the flock. A very nice sonnet and shows great creativity.
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Date: 2/2/2014 2:42:00 PM
I always wondered what happened to the "old" geese as I watched the V's leaving the ponds. I was also reading some sonnets at the time....thus the title. thanks for reading and commenting. John
Date: 2/1/2014 10:53:00 PM
my captcha said "4 DAD" hahaha. Too bad it was not father's day
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