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Sonnet For Winds of Change

SONNET FOR WINDS OF CHANGE Cross cirrus sky swift brush strokes paint mares' tails Tree tops are in restless susurration, While cumbrous clouds traverse in vapour trails Mead grass is fanned in wild undulation Lake face whipped to agitated motion Plumes roughed, wildfowl voyage with discretion Gulls in-land tell of wild storms on ocean All braced to face nature's bare aggression When young I chose such rugged medium Deplored the concept then of perfect peace Such state suggested endless tedium Hazard preferred to slow drawn out release While I now sometimes seek respite from strife I yet love winds that change, give breath to life

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Date: 12/5/2020 6:02:00 AM
Wonderful imagery. I was there in all my senses. This sonnet is complete in theme and content. Excellent work, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/8/2020 6:32:00 AM
Many thanks for your appreciative comments, Suzanne.
Date: 12/4/2020 5:36:00 PM
...ah! the wind....a night-time hurricane back in the fifties converted me.....the winds of time...change.....a walk on a windy (rainy) day was time as seclusion... ....stan sand
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/8/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thanks for the evocative references, Sand.
Date: 11/30/2020 8:56:00 AM
I like this very much Geoffrey. No stale, stalling winds here. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/8/2020 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, Linda.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/8/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 11/29/2020 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on first place, Geoffrey, in a well thought out sonnet!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 9:03:00 AM
Many thanks, Kim.
Date: 11/29/2020 4:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Change can be good if not too much change at one time. Sara
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 9:02:00 AM
Very glad you liked it, Sara.
Date: 11/29/2020 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on writing such a lovely, descriptive piece and getting the deserved kudos from John's competition.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 9:01:00 AM
Many thanks for the kind words and encouragement, Gary.
Date: 11/29/2020 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations Geoffrey, a beautiful sonnet, a worthy win... Belle
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 9:00:00 AM
Many thanks, Belle.
Date: 11/28/2020 10:08:00 PM
Hi Geoffrey, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis.
Date: 11/28/2020 9:29:00 PM
Beautifully worded with a personal touch. Congratulations on your #1 win Geoffrey ~ John
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, John.
Date: 11/28/2020 7:25:00 PM
A wonderful write Geoffrey and a nice win!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 11/28/2020 10:11:00 AM
a nice sonnet! Use of some great words like susurration! All the best in the contest!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/29/2020 8:58:00 AM
Thanks for the comment and good wishes, Krish.

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