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Sonnet 7 For Debbie's Crown of Sonnets

I must build a shelter, to fight off the cold. A rugged fortress lest poachers return – My bloody blazer, now, filthy fivefold! I am shivering cold; fire won’t burn. I stealthily creep seeking higher ground. With every fear a worn mind can churn, I crawl beneath some trees; more wood is found. Two bundles, brushwood: birch twigs, logs, to burn. I build a warm blaze upon the bare earth. Then, cook up some vittles: vermin and fern. While feeding my hunger, I loosen my girth. Then, see a mineshaft; my hope starts to yearn. Distantly hidden, completely unmanned. Through the north woods I come, my bow in hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 10:12:00 AM
Way to go!!! Great work..Sara
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/15/2014 9:44:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. By the way, did you recently message me about winning a lotto on facebook? I was wondering whether it was you or whether you account might have been hacked. $100,000. The person conversed informing me that my name was on the list of winners, too. After asking a couple of questions that a stranger might not know, I decided it was a scam. Was I right?
Date: 3/15/2014 1:10:00 AM
Dane, Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/15/2014 9:42:00 PM
Thanks, Skat A.! I was happily surprised that Debbie gave me a first place...very happily surprised.

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