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“Hold on, wait until this game ends” He said as he he sat at the edge of his seat with his elbows on knees Hands on his face, just below his eyes so he barely see All she wanted was a nice dinner with some friends They talked bad about him but she loves him, she pretends. He agrees to parties with ease But once it gets closer, excuses are his expertise. She was over it. It was time to make amends. She packed her bags and stood in front of the door She yelled at him and told him that she’s leaving He couldn’t hear her, all he cared about was the final score She knew he wouldn't do any grieving She closed the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/15/2016 11:28:00 PM
Simcha,nice to read this again SKAT
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:07:00 AM
Simcha, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,a 7 . Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:22:00 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Simcha - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:24:00 PM
Simcha,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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