Sonnet 1

I hate you just as I hate your mother! I loathe you as the Holy Pope loathes sin! More deeply than one can loathe another! Get out of my head! How did you get in? But oh how I love you at the same time! You matter more than the air that I breathe! You are the reason that I make words rhyme! It does not matter that you make me seethe! I will care as long as the Sun will rise. Hate you as I do leggings on fat girls! You embody everything I despise. Thinking about you too long makes me hurl! Yet each and every time that your head rears, I love to see you looking in mirrors.

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Skat A

Date: 6/18/2016 8:58:00 AM

Nice to see this one again, Aubrey...skat

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/5/2015 3:28:00 AM

Intense emotions and a powerful pen! Nicely done.

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2015 8:21:00 PM

AUBREY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2015 6:57:00 PM

Aubrey, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@