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Sonic Stings

Watching wild Wasps Fiercely flying forward Sonic stings, sickly screams Painfully piercing pandemonium Experimenting with form I have not previously attempted.

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Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 8:58:00 AM

I like this alliteration Richard but wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of one of those stings....The third line is outstanding I can hear the screams...Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2014 9:09:00 AM

I forgot I wrote this one. I guess I have now written two of them.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/20/2012 9:59:00 PM

What a clever poem. Alliteration with wonderful meter and meaning. Awesome!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2012 11:34:00 PM

Thanks Jon, Merry Christmas

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/18/2012 8:20:00 PM

The experiment was a success! FUN!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/19/2012 6:59:00 AM

Thanks Jack!

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/18/2012 5:29:00 PM

Alliteration, this is new format for me, how it works?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2012 5:40:00 PM

you have to have the same sounding sound for the beginning of each word in the line. Watching Wild Wasps all have W sound. I may be wrong but this was my interpretation of the instructions.