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Songs of Power : Let It Be

In times of despair I hear your voice in the air “it’s taken care of You just need to give a complete surrender” I see you walking me, now and then But in times of frustration I know I am carried Safe inside the cocoon of your arms Close to your chest Warm and protected Kept and consoled I just need to listen to the Silence The voice of Silence The whisper of Silence Saying, “I am yours, You are mine, Have faith, let it be…” -9/11/2015- contest: Songs of Power sponsor: Silent One 3rd place winner

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/28/2015 8:56:00 PM

a breathless piece i say powerful pen

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/29/2015 5:35:00 AM

you are so generous, i say :)) valuing your time, energy and patience you took in my poems :)) highly appreciated :)) the credits for this poem goes to Silent One as he inspired to write this :)) Love and peace...stay strong..

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/22/2015 12:25:00 AM

Love the way you wrote :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/22/2015 12:33:00 AM

thank you Debbie for this lovely comment :) Love and hugs..

Skat A

Date: 11/21/2015 11:01:00 PM

One of the best in this contest Remnants, Congratulations. **SKAT**

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/21/2015 11:07:00 PM

Thank you SKAT :)) love and peace

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/21/2015 7:04:00 PM

Congratulations Remnant

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/21/2015 8:34:00 PM

hey, thank you Nayda :) Take care

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/21/2015 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Remnants! Nice interpretation of the song. Sandra

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/21/2015 8:34:00 PM

thank you Sandra :) God bless

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/21/2015 10:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win!! A7

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/21/2015 11:10:00 AM

WOW..thank you Robert for your time, comment and 7 :) Take care

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2015 8:03:00 AM

love your interpretation of the lyrics - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/21/2015 9:58:00 AM

thank you Jan :) love and hugs :*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2015 3:56:00 AM

- I enjoy this, beautifully (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/11/2015 4:08:00 AM

thank you Anne :) love and peace :* -punnia-

Elis Artis

Date: 11/10/2015 7:08:00 PM

This is a winner in my book! I love the way you approached it:) Nice choice of song, everything's perfect +7

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/10/2015 8:44:00 PM

WOW.... I am so happy that you liked this and for the encouraging words...Thank you soo much.. Love, peace and happiness to you my friend :) :* will visit you soon..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2015 6:26:00 AM

Beautiful, this feels like a song.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/10/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Richard for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment.. :) God bless :))