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Songs of Nature COS No 9: AABB

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Poetic Form: Sonnet (Crown of ...) : Couplet

Inspired: 2023 November 25

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Of feet crinkles crispy snaps with your mate, as the ebbing tides that breaths winter's fate. Echoes summons a dusty field in white, closets freed skis and sleds still not quite right. Few sunflowers escort its mentored sun, facing their eastward repose position. Brisk breeze tails a crafted shawl snuggly wrapped, home, hot cider, lit fire, read book is lapped. A forested cabin that's well-engaged coast reservedly entertained assuage A prominence forestalls in burgundy, copper, and blonde. Snowflakes smooch tenderly the fallen perianths. Forgivingly melts to a smooth touch that norms Autumn's eve.

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Date: 11/26/2023 10:19:00 AM
I absolutely am loving the imagery in this and the flow of your magical words, your use of colours and descriptive diction truly is mesmerising. I especially love the line “ Few sunflowers escort its mentored sun,“ as someone that loves sunflowers that line stood out for me . “ the fallen perianths. Forgivingly melts to a smooth touch that norms Autumn's eve.” Beautiful ending. Creative use of alliterations too. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
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Date: 11/26/2023 11:34:00 AM
You honor me much too well, my friend. 'Twas our 1st winter 1980 in Washington state, Ink Empress, and our home was down from the highway close to the lakeshore, where my frat twin daughter and family live now. 'Twas reported being the worst winter to hit our area. Everbody forced to park their cars uphill or they'll never get it up to the highway. Hoping your Black Friday went well. Aloha, William

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