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Song Of The Universe

In cosmos vast, where stars entwine, The principle of order, so divine. Galaxies dance in cosmic sway, A symphony of night and day. Gravity weaves its silent thread, Binding galaxies, where they're led. Dark matter whispers its hidden tale, In cosmic expanse, a silent gale. Through boundless realms, the principle holds, A cosmic ballet, where wonder unfolds.

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Date: 12/2/2023 7:36:00 AM
Great poem James.. good choice of words..
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James Mclain
Date: 12/2/2023 11:44:00 AM
Thank you for your significant input, Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/2/2023 5:55:00 AM
This is beautiful Jim. You could have taken it over the top but kept it simple and sweet
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/2/2023 6:29:00 AM
I especially like the line "Dark matter whispers its hidden tale." Appropriate since they're still trying to figure out just what dark matter is
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James Mclain
Date: 12/2/2023 6:18:00 AM
Tom, I humbly thank you very much and I wish you all the best on your own poems. Merry Christmas.

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