Song of the Soul

Feel the beat flow, Listen to the violin nice and slow, As your body sways to and fro, The rhythm surrounds your soul. Before you know it,The music has taken control.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2014 2:26:00 PM

Beautiful write.....wow... simple and short and the theme's about musik - the love of my life! XDD "The rhythm surround your soul" - adore that line to the core. Liked the rhyme in it. This would be mono-rhyme in fact, but you still picked good. Anyways, have a good week and weekend, poet and friend. Thanks for commenting on my poetry...like hearing from you. ^ ... ^

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/31/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thank you for your comment David it means alot that you like this poem it just came to me,When i was thinking about how music can just take over your soul-Love Ettie PS. love hearing from you too:)