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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Enclosed Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 January 08
Image: Black Widow Spiders, Larger Female and Smaller Male by Shutterstock 

A female black widow spider sits near its egg sac while a male black widow spider approaches

Placement perched will measure the life of them. Air begged resistance as trace lacks its forms. Mute heed legs of Black Widow Spider norms, ghostly strands of rare resilience sense strum for the secretive possessor. Kindred, most blacks, and some browns share Rama's clocks on their red or orange paunch that some do don. Due to our size, strikes are rare, flee instead. Venom: fifteen times stronger than rattlers. Not all males are killed by their mates end of breeding. Finding well-fed virgins, a suave term tactic furthered being: home wreckers. Destroy web that females put pheromones, assures their breed a place among unknowns.

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Date: 1/8/2024 11:47:00 AM
Nice addition to your crown of sonnet series .. It delves into the intriguing and often misunderstood world of Black Widow spiders, providing a unique perspective on their lives and behaviours. The use of language creates a sense of observation and scientific inquiry, offering a measured and analytical tone.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/8/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, as your constant reviews of the Songs this-a-way are duly noted with a hearty thank you. Aloha, William.
Date: 1/8/2024 9:59:00 AM
William, your sonnet is truly exceptional and captivating. I found myself engrossed in the intricate web of magnificent verses you skillfully crafted.
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:14:00 AM
Thanks, Lasaad, for your generous sharing, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 1/8/2024 4:43:00 AM
fabulous Sonnet, Williams. An informative read as I got caught up in the web of fantastic lines you wove together :-) I like the way you used "pheromones." Have a splendid day, Sara
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Date: 1/8/2024 5:24:00 AM
Yes, males wreck the female's web so to claim female as its own, thank you, Sara. Aloha, William

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