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Song of Stars

Over trite words, wind resounds song of stars to soothe ‘neath a diamond-encrusted sky. When dawn’s pastel sun shines down from afar, We’ll remember our twinkling lullaby. Eve’s cradle song transcends sun’s birthing cries. A newborn horizon filters fresh light. Morn breaks too soon, solar display’s contrite. As sun of broad blues coaxes us out, lest we retreat in night; our souls to recite wondrous chorus of glory through darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2015 1:27:00 AM
I love the scope of color, the vivid imagery is astounding. "As sun of broad blues coaxes us out, lest we retreat in night; our souls to recite wondrous chorus of glory through darkness." I'm in awe... wow... I also love the line: "Eve’s cradle song transcends sun’s birthing cries"...amazing work Rhonda. It really soothed my mind tonight. A much needed relaxation! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/29/2015 6:31:00 PM
Rhonda, a soothing shining write, full of captivating phrasing of words 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, a day
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:36:00 PM
The evenings have been cool here and the skies clear, perfect for stargazing. I enjoyed this lovely reflective poem that indeed sings with your carfully chosen words Rhonda.
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:05:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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