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Song of November 28th

in all the stillness of mid-morning a well-played song brown leaves still hang on branches of trees and I figure all that is going to fall has fallen but the tree still hangs onto life I sit at my laptop a blank page faces me on the screen and as it flickers all it asks from me is a poem that’s all a poem but it must be true to itself and as I run through my mind I see a litany of faces of the all the loves I've known and in a moment of silence I must admit that I still love them all but the room is still heat rises from a vent to ease the chill I feel in my bones I know winter is near I look out the window and see a sparrow hop across the lawn and something inside says I’ve seen it before

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Date: 1/20/2023 3:36:00 AM
As Kim has expressed, I too have a feeling of deja vu. I have seen the blank page on the screen staring at me several times, making me wonder for long, what I should write. A lovely poem Mike.
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Date: 11/29/2022 12:59:00 PM
what a cool "in the moment" poem about your November day
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Date: 11/29/2022 9:51:00 AM
Like deja-vu
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Date: 11/28/2022 10:24:00 AM
Oh, I love this and what a great ending too! I am happy to be led to it today. I enjoyed this :)
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