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Song of Evening Rain

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We took no notice of a sky turned gray And the change of brooding gloom The autumn rain had tiptoed in We almost missed it's coming, but for leaves That murmured quick surprise along the eaves And tapped excitement on the window-pane But having heard, we left our cozy place And stepped outdoors to smell the air To feel the slope of rain upon the face And could even hear the rustling trees Dripping wet with sheer delight Gratefully welcoming tap-dance songs Of raindrops in the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/1/2012 11:21:00 AM
CARRIE, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:31:00 PM
Outstanding Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/30/2012 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie a super win xx
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Carrie. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Spring Rain" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 2:13:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your win, loved it..David
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Date: 5/19/2012 1:34:00 AM
Congratultaions carrie
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie, great free verse
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:54:00 AM
A stunning piece Carrie, love the imagery.. Congratulations on your win ;) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:48:00 AM
Aye! What a beautiful vivid picture you have recreated for me Carrie. And could even hear the rustling trees Sweetly praising, and dripping with silvery flight. Love that! Number one in my books. Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 10:59:00 PM
dazzling write, carrie...sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:00:00 PM
Really enjoyed this one, Carrie :) How awesome that you welcome rains this way-- I too love to step outside when it rains (haha ok, more like when we have typhoons ^_~) -- congrats on your win and hugs :D
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Date: 7/17/2011 8:27:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., Carrie
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your win, such a nice write.....luv Michael
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Date: 7/17/2011 7:37:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on another great win for a wonderful write on rain ... amazing lines as always ... enjoy with luv..
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:39:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d
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Date: 10/30/2009 5:36:00 PM
This is absolutely majestic.Made me wish for the rain so that I could step outside and experience what you did.And then I realized,if it did rain,would I,could I.Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:53:00 PM
thankxxx Carrie for your kind comments... I luv your Song of Evening Rain.. it has rained here for four days straight and your poem is quite appropriate ... you have captured rain's essence.
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Date: 10/15/2009 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful journey. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/14/2009 12:54:00 AM
Carrie love that penultimate line. thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:48:00 PM
Carrie...Your poetry is so amazing and refreshing!! I never get tired of it. Also thanks for your great support and kind comments every since I joined this site...Gotta' go read some more of your stuff!! - Tim
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Date: 10/13/2009 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful !! Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Carrie. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2009 9:51:00 AM
I love to sit on my porch at night, better when pouring rain.... So soothing......:JP0
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Date: 10/13/2009 7:59:00 AM
I can see and feel the scene. The other morning I opened the door and I could here the trees dropping moisture which at the time was more fog but later developed into rain. Keep writing.Sara
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