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Song For Spring

Snow shoaling o'er the frozen land, so biting, bitter cold; broken branches stretched like fingers pointing nowhere in particular articulate the miseries of winter's stranglehold. Spring seems a light year gone, her gentle breath a dream, but green shall conquer white and overcome its crushing hold when the crocus once reveals her lovely sheen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/31/2015 8:29:00 PM
i love this poem! your use of alliteration and language is the mark of a true poet. i love the "broken branches" line especially...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/31/2015 9:03:00 PM
I know how much you appreciate rhythm and rhyme, and for the most part so do I. I'm fond of '...particular articulate!' Thanks much!! :) Keith
Date: 5/31/2015 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful spring poem!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/31/2015 3:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend! Keith

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