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Song For a Carriage

Carriage of soul Wanders alone In thought. The bone From rails creaking. Nightingale dips To warble, sing. Hymns on upswing Drive soul afire. Ride On A Pathya Vat nette onclaud contest ( carriage) posted by Rora Onna, 3 August 2014

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Date: 8/11/2014 6:27:00 PM
Wow what a great image! well done!!!
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:58:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:50:00 AM
Awesome write Rora! congrats on great win!
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Date: 8/11/2014 4:51:00 AM
transforming a heavy soul into a melodious flight invigorates; lovely metaphors, rora... thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your high win.. huggs
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:25:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:30:00 AM
Carriage of soul, nice interpretation, Rora, congrats.
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:23:00 AM
Lovely take on the carriage theme. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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