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Somewhere To Go

The days pass slow The nights even slower The hours spent thinking of my mistake Has kept me awake I can't have you now I lost that chance It slipped out of my hand Like water on a web Gone at the first light The pain still lingers I can't help but wonder What I did that went wrong We all hide our pain in the masqurade pretend that everything's alright But we cry at home, feeling alone The pain stops us and we all know... This won't be our home We never felt more alone the darkness will consume as it will hide the truth we all want to know that there's somewhere to go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/19/2013 8:44:00 PM
Welcome to the site. You are off to a decent start with this first submission.
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:47:00 AM
- Hello Cassidy - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:06:00 PM
a great poem, Cassidy, i like to think deep. and wonder if there ever is a place with no darkness, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/15/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hi Cassidy, a very clever and deep poem.. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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