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Somewhere On Top

SOMEWHERE ON TOP Breathing free, I behold-- sash-like fluffy blue clouds hugging mountain-waists. Nearby, terrace of trees greets and falls that warble deep. ___________________ ©O.E. Guillermo 05:20 PM, January 10, 2015 30 syllables Sponsor nette onclaud Contest Name SOMEWHERE

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:17:00 PM

thank you for the reply...PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/15/2015 1:53:00 AM

As lovely as ever Olive! wonderful pic painted my dear! Congrats on fine win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 6:49:00 AM

thanks much dr. UPma.. :)! God bless you..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2015 12:48:00 AM

yours was really unique and I remembered it easily. Congrats, it is a very nice poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 6:48:00 AM

thanks much Andie.. :)! God bless you.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:31:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 6:47:00 AM

thanks much Lolly Linda.. :)! hugs

James Fraser

Date: 1/14/2015 4:24:00 PM

Many congratulations Olive with this little gem, with such delightful imagery, James :) x :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 6:46:00 AM

thanks much James.. :)! Grats too.. :D

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/14/2015 10:17:00 AM

Hi Olive Congrats---love--rajat

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 6:32:00 AM

thanks much Rajat.. :)!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/13/2015 10:43:00 PM

A beautiful, tranquil somewhere, Olive...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 3:16:00 AM

thanks much Rhonda.. hugs too.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/13/2015 9:45:00 PM

Congrats on the win with this somewhere to be, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 3:15:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram. :) GBU

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2015 5:45:00 PM

ooo-pretty. I love your unique style!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 3:14:00 AM

thanks much Cassie.. ;) yours is a beauty too!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/13/2015 5:23:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!! This had to be a winner!:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thanks much PAul.. :)! I appreciate it.. :)!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 5:29:00 PM

Hi Great Paul,,nice to see you here...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2015 2:48:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2015 5:05:00 AM

thanks Jan :) hugs

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2015 2:08:00 PM

Hi Olive, congratulations on your win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2015 5:04:00 AM

thanks much Sandra.. :) God bless.. :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/12/2015 1:03:00 PM

Lovely Olive. Rated 7 - Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/13/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thanks much VErlena.. God bless you always. :)!

Patrick Cooper

Date: 1/11/2015 4:53:00 PM

I have to reiterate what others have said, this is fantastic imagery.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/12/2015 1:15:00 AM

Thanks much Patrick.. :) GOd bless you..

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2015 3:01:00 PM

This imagery works well for you and for me! I'm sure that it will also be appreciated by the sponsor! Nature never fails to inspire! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/12/2015 1:03:00 AM

I hope so Paul.. :) I wasn't late in submitting this time.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2015 5:03:00 PM

that was a unique and beautiful image of the cloud sash around the mountain's waist. Sure to tickle Nette's fancy!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 4:09:00 AM

Thanks much Andie.. :)! I hope so it will tickle hers.. :)!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/10/2015 5:01:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery Olive. I found this a tranquil calming write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:56:00 AM

thanks much Jan.. :)! I am afraid of heights but someday I really like to be in this situation.. :)! it's like I've touch heaven.. :)! hugs back