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Somewhere Near Forever

When you are asked where you are going Friday night tell them you are going somewhere near forever Our words rise heavenward like smoke from a fire as we taste a part of eternity The world as we know it is something we can deal with if we look upwards at the heavens with awe This special time - this Shabbat Links us with the past points the way to a worthy future Brings us in tune with the lyre David stroked to ease Saul's pain

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Date: 3/4/2012 12:54:00 AM
Loved this poem and the ethos & scenes you evoke Matthew, also thank you for the great comment on my last piece;
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:31:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful poem. Great imagery in the lyre of David.
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Date: 2/28/2012 4:41:00 PM
Appreciate this poem. Love the title. It is so important to be linked to and respectful of the past while looking towards the future. (Thanks for your comment about my poem.)
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Date: 2/26/2012 10:17:00 AM
Wow.... this is really lovely... a pleasure to read...smiles....chiquita
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:07:00 AM
This is using some Jewish terminology(Shabbat)?.I remember how David played the Harp helping ease Saul's mental, emotional distress.How Saul repaid him?.Enjoyed reading this morning.Thanks for stopping by.The Tyburn that I had penned is not correct.I can't remember if I had written one or not but looked it up quickly yesterday jotted down some notes from another site.After I posted the one that I wrote, I looked it up on this site, it is not correct.I am not sure what direction to go .Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2012 5:08:00 AM
I thought about changing it to Free Verse..That could be a solution..Sara

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