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Somewhere Along Her Hands

' '''''''' ' '' Somewhere a hand is reading out loud a Dickinson, a leather-worn journal recording daily life’s soirees, memorizing rain and shielding little girl’s eyes from the blasting words of the sun. Somehow someone reaches from darkness to drive the shadows that meet the body of her child: trembling with excitement or fear, sliding tender fingers on the back; parts the arms like wind that rushes in all seasons to reveal the lush, delicious landscape of summer ; then rubs the elbow down the forearm to greet the cheeks with a kiss and watches while the hands move back without help or guidance from the daughter sleeping. ~ Somewhere a mother, grandmother, godmother, stepmother, or mother nature weeps over love’s broken child; uses her hair to bandage the wound on the youth’s head …unfolds her hands from prayer to widen the window of angel psalms pressing her lips into alleys of the sapling’s mouth: a tear transforms her from receiving to giving. .. and she feels without seeing the last light of the night; lit for those who witness its final extinguishing. © ........ .... ........ *with love to my Mom who had passed on* Gautami Phookan's Poet lll Contest by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/1/2014 4:58:00 PM
A #1 for me nette dear Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2014 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful tribute to your mom Nette
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Date: 10/1/2014 9:35:00 AM
A great tribute paid to your mom with touching emotions, nette. congrats
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Date: 10/1/2014 8:53:00 AM
A very touching sad poem. Congratulations Nette on your win.
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Date: 10/1/2014 8:40:00 AM
a wonderful tribute to your mum Nette. Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 10/1/2014 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful words and expressions! Congrats nette on a your fine win in my contest with this touching tribute to you mom. Love you dear.. huggs
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Date: 4/6/2012 11:43:00 AM
You have a wonderful way with words, Nette. This is a lovely tribute to your mother. Congrats on your win! Love, kim
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:35:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in P.D's "Mothers day" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:57:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations with your beautiful and heart touching mother'' poem. thank you for supporting my contest*. Have yourself a good night. It was an honor having your poem in my contest, luv~PD
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:06:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on an impressive write and win for Mother contest.. a superior piecre of elegant poetry .. sensational sweets..
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:52:00 PM
Amazingly written Nette, Your pen never drys up. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2012 7:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Beautiful tribute. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Nette! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:09:00 PM
goodness nette, there is so much contained within this poem, I can't quote my fave lines as there are too many! congrats on a great win :-)
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on a fantastic write! Jon
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on another brilliant win.. never surprised to see u at the top of winners lists .. words of grandeur and grace always .. sweets..
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:04:00 AM
I commented on this stirring piece before and I still love it. Rereading doens't grow old. Congratulations Nette
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:51:00 AM
Congrats, nette. Outstanding write. Well deserved win. Kudos. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:05:00 AM
Touching piece in so many ways, as energy workers we sometimes wonder if it is 'desirable' to move them on? 'cleanse a room' or 'cleanse a scattered soul' hard choices and ones most have to make whether they are aware of it or not. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/31/2011 4:24:00 PM
This is a very thoughtful piece. Well deserving of your win. Congratulations
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Date: 8/29/2011 7:36:00 PM
Fine master piece ,Nette.Congratulations on your win.you deserve this,keep flying...mate...
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Date: 8/29/2011 4:57:00 PM
Oh my such beautiful words nette.Congrats on your 2nd.place win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 8/29/2011 2:14:00 PM
Reitterating on Constances` comment. Beautiful words flowing throughout your well deserved win blessings and love from Paul
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations, nette on a shared second place win in my contest, your presentations are always so awesome, I have no idea how you do it, but they amaze me, and your words are so elegant.. just beautiful, dear friend~~
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