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I’m inside the night Twirling my thumbs Watching moths About my head Beating soft wings Against things. I’m outside the day Wiping sweat from The back of my neck Watching pterodactyls Beating their huge Wings like heavy plastic Against the scorching air. I’m inside my bed Turning occasionally Imagining the breath Of a vast ocean one Thousand yards below Me and the damp salty Air wets my face and ears. I’m beneath the clay Dreaming I’m alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/24/2010 10:02:00 AM
Well done David, enjoyed your poetry, lots of hidden messages..Have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 7/24/2010 4:16:00 AM
From beneath that clay,yes David we can all dream we are alive. .In dreams anything is possible,that's why I love dreaming as much as I love living,even If I'm living just beneath the clay. .tmfvs,C.C.
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:29:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, David! And thank you for commenting "Water-Meadows"....Have a nice weekend!...Gert
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Date: 7/23/2010 6:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this morning David. I will be away for the weekend and will be back to read Monday. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2010 11:11:00 PM
David, this is simply awesome! A fav for this one. Beating soft wings against things...... and the meaning of the whole poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:24:00 PM
Interesting dream. A nice feeling of the damp salty ocean air after the scorching air where pterodactyls were flying. :) Well done, David.
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Date: 7/22/2010 9:18:00 PM
Have to say when I started reading this I wasn't sure where it was going.. Awesome ending David.. Wilma
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Date: 7/22/2010 8:56:00 PM
good write....
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