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Sometimes Be Real

Sometimes go bare sometimes be real, secrets,I too will share face to face in green room before the make up if you can dare. =========000========= Placement- 5th (Oct 2013) Contest-Poem of Compresson( Theme-Veil) By-kash poet Date- 2nd Oct.2013 Sponsor--Nette Onclaud =========000========= Compresson Poem---Rhyme Scheme a/b/a/c/d/a, syllable count-- 4/5/6/6/5/4

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Date: 10/29/2013 9:22:00 PM
Well done Kash
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Date: 10/13/2013 3:30:00 PM
A well deserving win kash...This poem speaks on its own.Excellent.Tnks for visiting ..much appreciated.
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Date: 10/13/2013 8:03:00 AM
I like this one a lot. Congratulations Kash.
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:27:00 PM
Kash... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/10/2013 7:55:00 PM
Yes, I agree with you, Kash. Why hide behind trappings? Lovely win, my friend. I hope your birthday was a good one. I wish you many, many more. Licia :-)
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:06:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your winning poem! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:23:00 PM
Kash. lovely win........SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:11:00 AM
Excellent ! a winner to me , less said yet brilliant .
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Date: 10/8/2013 5:29:00 AM
Be real..Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:40:00 PM
- Happy birthday, Kash!! <3 <3 <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:11:00 AM
and a HOP- HOP HAPPY birthday to one of my greeat buddies... where to, kashi?.. shake it, friend!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/6/2013 6:14:00 PM
Kash, I'm wondering if you are celebrating the 7th already.. I have 6 hours to go. NOT THAT I'M COUNTING.... lol ;) Happy Birthday Kash... hope you are having a great time... PSSSS...I really like this, deeply pened.....xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:31:00 AM
WAY to GO, my friend, a big congrats to you on your win.
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Date: 10/5/2013 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/5/2013 2:12:00 PM
somehow, i see a pinch of humor here, akshi bud... congrats on your win in my contest.. check my blog about it..:) huggs
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Date: 10/5/2013 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations again, Kash.......and I would not be here on the list, had you not caught my syllable mis-count. Once again, I owe you , my friend! Always so grateful.....thanks so much!
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Date: 10/4/2013 3:53:00 PM
I really like this. The hidden story behind the words is eating away between the lines. I love when poems create that effect. Great write! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/4/2013 2:21:00 PM
Unique and wonderful,Kash ! - Luck in contest! - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2013 8:40:00 PM
It is not always easy to unveil our real selves........but this is a good example to those who hide behind a false front. Honesty comes in many forms! :) Good one!!
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:50:00 PM
sorry , Kash. thanks for letting me know. I had not known that you guys used the word green room same as we do. the poem makes perfect sense in that context. I LOVE it.
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:28:00 PM
And did you mean make-up, like cosmetics? or make up like getting back together? by the way, I was curious why you put ? at my poem. and also wanted to tell you thanks for that one invitation you gave me in hotmail but I don't really understand those things. For example, the one called LInkeden, I don't do that one either. I am registered there but don't understand it and Debs keeps inviting me to hers!!
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:26:00 PM
Hi, Kash, what is the significance of the green room for you? Here it means a room where you wait before a television appearance. Is it something like that? I like your poem, just want to understand it better.
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Date: 10/2/2013 10:23:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Kash...if only we dared! Wonderful poem...GOOD LUCK!!!
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:28:00 AM
This is a beautifully created write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a lovely piece, masterfully crafted poem, Great Work!!
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