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Sometimes a Bamboozler

Afternoon thunderstorms brew_ winds increase White Crepe Myrtle sways to rhythm of breeze Which varies_ sometimes swift; sometimes does cease In times past man would have thought God displeased More fear would have fallen when eerie fell night And clouds lingered thick as fluffy meringue Some silver, some gray, some charcoal some white No thunder, lightning, eerie can't argue Life can have those cloudy eerie strange times When one can't exactly describe what's wrong There seems to be a foreboding strange signs How relieved we feel when events become song The clouds still hang heavy the air cooler Feelings Satan sends sometimes a bamboozler Definition: Bamboozler one who deceives or gets the better of through trickery..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 8:20:00 AM
I know what you mean in your third verse Sara...I sometimes have that feeling of foreboding, but nothing I can quite put my finger on. It's a relief when the song comes out, I can tell you. Great write. One love Joy Wells
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Date: 9/7/2012 7:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2012 10:28:00 PM
clouds of a tune , bamboozle the moon, till reason claims the night... its orright babe ...
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Date: 9/6/2012 8:13:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 9/6/2012 7:28:00 AM
wonderful sonnet Sara, love the discription within this awesome poem,
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:09:00 PM
Satan is always a bamboozler. Good write here as usual, Sara.
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Date: 9/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
I am wowed. You rock sara! So profound with you excellent choice of words, as always~Cindy
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Date: 9/5/2012 3:30:00 PM
What a delightful play on the senses my friend! You have created a grandiose poem here Sara! I love the magnificence of storms and their character they each presume! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/5/2012 2:57:00 PM
A lot of people look on storms as evil, I think they are misunderstood. It is just the dance of hot and cold air that causes all the commotion. Enjoyed your sonnet.
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