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Sometimes— Sometimes I feel like you Are treating me like her, And we both know what happened to her. But I am strong. I won’t melt into a puddle Of tears as she did. I stand my ground like A little oak tree with my limbs Reaching for the sky— Like my imagination, Like my intrepid poetry Undaunted by the din Of your angry voice, Words spoken through clenched teeth. I saw the hurt in her eyes You didn’t see, or maybe you just didn’t care? When you yell at ME I flee instead to the sanctuary Of my quiet, softly lit room, To my wide screen T.V. With movies that cheer me. Sometimes. Sometimes— Sometimes you push me too far And my patient Taurus nature Explodes into an angry rage I can’t control. And I think it is then That you realize you Have gone too far and I become quiet in fear I won’t keep the cap On that angry explosion. I try to express my inner Most feelings through poetry To keep my balance— Balance in OUR lives, And sometimes I succeed. Sometimes. © 2014 Connie Marcum Wong *Dedicated to all the ladies who understand

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Date: 12/31/2014 1:46:00 AM
Connie, to me writing is my therapy and the best part is when you are ready to share what you have written you have worked through the emotions. Many would be able to identify with this gem. Standing tall is the only thing to do.. awesome write, you put into words what many felt. Wishing you a blessed 2015 xxhugsxx
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Date: 1/1/2015 12:35:00 PM
I agree with you Wilma. Writing can be very cathartic and good for the soul, even if it is not shared by anyone. Thank you for your thoughtful comment and I wish you a wonderful new year too. Hugs, Connie
Date: 11/13/2014 3:41:00 PM
Wow Connie, did you write this for me? I remember when I lived in that same room. Great write! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:05:00 PM
I do know a lot of ladies who can identify, like you....Thank you Brenda. I appreciate you commenting on my poem. Hugs, Connie
Date: 11/13/2014 9:23:00 AM
Nicely expressed piece, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:56:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram. I appreciate your comment very much. I want to congratulate you on your recent wonderful first place win and your other wins too! Awesome! Blessings, Connie
Date: 11/12/2014 4:11:00 PM
Oh I can relate to this Connie - beautifully portrayed showing the impact of someones actions and your reactions. Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you commenting on this poem. Hugs, Connie
Date: 10/27/2014 8:04:00 PM
Beautiful Expression in this piece, Connie! Indeed emotions are honestly displayed in this piece of actions, and reaction in moments of "Sometimes". Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my newer poems. Peace.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/15/2014 7:27:00 PM
Thank you Jiril. I will check out your work. I care for my little granddaughter who is 2 and half so my time on here is limited but I read and comment when I can. Aloha, Connie
Date: 10/7/2014 10:31:00 PM
Just came here to say goodnight. I dare not open Hotmail and see too many emails I might not have time to answer. ahha. Or maybe hardly any at all. I never know what to expect these days!! Just good to see you so active over here, my friend!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/7/2014 10:40:00 PM
It is only 5:30 pm here but I am falling asleep on the computer. Getting up at dawn will do that to you. LOL. Good night!
Date: 9/25/2014 4:10:00 AM
I stand my ground like A little oak tree with my limbs Reaching for the sky.. amazing lines it is really touching, women word itself is the balance of life... and you have perfectly expressed your inner feelings..
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Date: 9/25/2014 6:38:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comment letting me know you understood the meaning of my words. Blessings, Connie
Date: 9/12/2014 8:54:00 AM
just itching to see your entry in my contest. I hope to judge it shortly!! Joe on the road tonight and tomorrow so I can finally get 'er done and start up a new contest!!! Hope you are having a good day, Connie. Take care!
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Date: 9/13/2014 12:35:00 AM
Too much to fill you in on so I will email you Andie. I want to find time to put up a contest here too. Have a great weekend. Thanks, Connie
Date: 9/11/2014 2:47:00 PM
An appeal -nearly desperate - for peace and recognition. You have managed through style and your captivating feminine whimsy to bring a tear. Simple stuff, Connie, but very effective. Love, daver
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Date: 9/12/2014 2:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Daver. I wasn't upset when I wrote that poem, it was from past experience but the memories remain vivid. I hope you are feeling much better? Hugs, Connie
Date: 9/4/2014 9:04:00 PM
hey, connie, I almost clicked on that poem above this one for my contest and then thought, I better not see it yet!! Thanks so much for reading my poems today. Actually Edutainment did not take me long to write. I just had to gather up all the words I wanted to try to use and stick the ones in there wherever they fit! I have several to post but just putting it off. How are you doing??
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/4/2014 11:18:00 PM
I am doing better after falling down the stairs with my crutches last week. I will be really glad when my foot is healed. How are you doing?
Date: 9/4/2014 11:22:00 AM
Connie; I love this poem. Us women should always be strong and stand up for what we believe in. In poetry, like in a song - we can express our feelings. We can bless, or we can curse, whatever feels better. thanks for sharing this great poem. Have a blessed day... Lucilla
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/4/2014 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Lucilla. That is why my marriage has lasted 33 years. It is all about understanding your other half. We have both accepted each other as we are. Growing older has its challenges, but you learn to cope. Blessings, Connie
Date: 9/1/2014 10:43:00 AM
Dear Connie, I'm glad you retreat to poetry when someone treats you this way. It's a good catharsis. People who evoke anger this way are often expressing misplaced rage. Likely, it wasn't something you said that caused this person to explode. When "pushed too far," many of us are capable of rage we never knew we had. I am one of "the ladies who understand." Love, Carolyn
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/3/2014 1:35:00 PM
I appreciate your understanding and your kind comment Carolyn.
Date: 8/31/2014 4:39:00 AM
Well done Connie!!! You expressed these sentiments with an attitude of calm and determination, all in one. In life silence can be used as a very valid weapon, but there are times when we have to vent our feelings. Glad that poetry comes so handy to you in such instances. Take care. // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/3/2014 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Paul. It does help to vent through poetry. You also understand. Blessings, Connie
Date: 8/31/2014 3:31:00 AM
Oh Connie. ..... you've touched me with this write. I'm glad you have coping mechanisms. Sending you hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/3/2014 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Eileen. Blessings, Connie
Date: 8/31/2014 3:25:00 AM
Hi Connie, This is a poignant poem that touches a raw nerve of the human condition as it exists, as it really is. Nicely done. Peace seems to be illusive. It is good you have a strong will to write, soft words with sound merit, to capture and portray the truth. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
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Date: 9/3/2014 3:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for your understanding comments Earl. Blessings, Connie
Date: 8/31/2014 1:31:00 AM
A beautifully written poem. Masterful in its construction and delivered from the heart. I have added the X-Rating to my recent piece. I hope I didn't offend you in anyway. You have my heart felt apologies. Thank You for you kind suggestion.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/31/2014 7:23:00 PM
Maurice, it is I who appreciate you not being offended by my suggestion, and thank you so much for your sweet comments on my poem. Blessings
Date: 8/31/2014 1:10:00 AM
yes, dear Connie, I for one understand this. Your poem is heartfelt and poignant. I have your Taurus in my moon and always I can relate so well to your emotions. A truer friend and kinder woman than you would be rare! Luv, Andrea
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/3/2014 3:44:00 PM
How sweet of you my dear friend. You are a kindred spirit whose poetry always inspires me. It is wonderful to have such a dear friend as you. Thank you for your understanding. Hugs, Connie
Date: 8/31/2014 12:55:00 AM
Words coming from the depths of hearts always create touching effect dear friend Connie. A very touching write where hard truths float to show the bubbles of anger and concern which always come out from the mind. Thank you for your kind comment on my new Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/3/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thank you for understanding my poem and for your kind comment Ravindra. Many blessings, Connie
Date: 8/30/2014 10:53:00 PM
Beautiful Connie... Enjoyed and fav! Verlena
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/30/2014 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for fav'ing this Verlena and for your sweet comment.

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