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Something New

Doing something new that itself is a test Using my brain guess that would be best First I must track it, think it's incognito Hiding from that annoying mosquito The buzz in my head is tinnitus they say More like a mossie whose lost its way Can feel the wheels of thinking turning of sun and an ice cream i am yearning Why do I get it on my nose Cos I am a messy girl I suppose Hey this is a first, am using rhyme Brain your doing ok this time Will take it easy now don't want to be stressed Cos it's with only one brain cell I've been blessed I close my eyes thinking may try this again Now shall I travel by bus or train Oh my! my brain has ceased up, has gone I fear Thinks that's enough usage.....wiping away a tear Contest :Trying something new by Nina Parmenter Penned 25 October 2018

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Date: 12/15/2018 3:09:00 AM
Nice one Seren, good rhyme and flow too. I liked this one.
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Date: 10/25/2018 2:50:00 PM
the word they have **** out was queer why for goodness sake
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/25/2018 2:55:00 PM
I have altered it now to I fear...lol
Date: 10/25/2018 11:32:00 AM
Hey, hey!!!! I haven't seen something new from in you in ages! How cool is this! I can relate wholly to this piece as I go through similar challenges about 4...7 times a day. :) Keep this up!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/25/2018 2:51:00 PM
Hi Drake thanks for commenting I have written a few lately. lol

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