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Something Lost

For the first time in seven and a half years You truly disappointed me For the first time in seven and a half years I wasn't proud of you And today you discovered that you Didn't have the ally in me, You perhaps always thought you had Today we both lost something Today we both lost that belief in each other And I cannot help but feel That things between us Will never ever be quite the same again

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  1. Date: 8/24/2013 12:12:00 PM
    - I am always looking for new "Luke" poem ... and forget to read the beautiful writing. - - Thanks for the nice photo on "my wall"! - You are always welcome to read my poems .... your choice .... - I have no new "Adrian" poem, could probably have written a lot about him too. - (There will probably be more ... lol) - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Wonderful poem. You show relationships are never one-sided when it comes to success failure or blame.