Somersaults On the Trampoline

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Jumping, bouncing up down really keen. Double somersaults on the trampoline. Enthusiasm loud giggles. Out doing big brothers errs, Bouncing higher, higher like jumping bean. What goes up, must come straight down. What the hack! Double flip, lull …. plop, flop, flat on their back. Turns head over heels in air Landing on their feet with flair. This's the upright way you do it with knack. 5/11/2024

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Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/12/2024 11:22:00 PM

Such a fine description of a player on a trampoline. Felt like I was there. Hugs, my friend. xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/12/2024 5:23:00 PM

this was a delightful and fun read...I needed something light this evening. Thank you. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/11/2024 8:49:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative write with the fun picture. "Good Luck" We both did this. Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........