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My father left here. I feel like I will leave when around the same age that he was.
Someone Who Remembers He was seventeen when I was born. He has gone on, soon I will be as he. A memory in a faded Picture. When my image has been drawn back unto the light photo paper made from timber Alive-only if I leave Someone who Remembers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2014 9:03:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant poetry. "When my image has been drawn back unto the light photo paper made from timber'—deliciously unique!
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Date: 2/1/2014 8:25:00 PM
Vicki. Great writing. I love and saluate the poem. Its feeling in few lines are commendable and picture stands in mind being alive. Deepak.
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Date: 2/1/2014 10:01:00 AM
I relate to this honest and soulful write, Vicki. Reminds me of the song, "What's it all about, Alfie?" Oh yes, I really, really liked this poem,
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Date: 1/31/2014 2:12:00 AM
MUCH LOVE AND A BIG OLE WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP
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Date: 1/30/2014 9:41:00 PM
Touching piece.. touches my heart and soul Momma... very well written
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 1/31/2014 2:11:00 AM
You seem to have a knack for feeling and becoming tuned in,when no one else gets my drift I can tell that Debbie has.Thanks for commenting on this one.

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