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Someone To Care

Standing at the easel of life a portrait of a man so much in love with that to tempt the mood, unable to caress his wanton spirit when cohabiting with a spent part of life’s toxic waste, his need to step off the world to escape its inhabitants from choking him to death, yet somewhere deep within his sunken soul a desire, to carve out a memorial in poetry with words now strange to him, but words they were of love the sweet scent of flowers, sunshine and simple things like that, yet his battle against his poison was arduous and, on the wane. a summer’s walk purged winter through nonchalant eyes seasons of despair Suddenly amongst a throng of internet poets an angel appeared, one to care, when magically she began to chase away his need, when painting a different picture of the world one he once knew when that he was of a child, one he needed to be able to reach out to, when from across the curvature of the earth many words of hope, tenderness sincerity, words of understanding and purpose. Yet with an abruptness she gave him a choice ‘Lie down my friend’ She said ‘Defeated and die’ Or rise everyday with the perpetual sun and live, give something of yourself, antidotes to aid those hankering down the same road you travelled, you can build on the positivity, armed with love and care, and with it your body your mind your soul will be cleansed. oh will-o’-the -wisp those that walketh in the dark reach for the sunlight © Harry J Horsman 2022 revamp of an old free verse poem.

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Date: 8/12/2022 5:26:00 AM
Good Morning hh. Please allow me to let your words stand because there is nothing I could say or add for it would diminish your entry witch is excellent. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. May this day find you well. Blessings.
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Date: 8/7/2022 1:01:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. As we all reach maturity there is always the need of one understanding them even more, I am so very happy that this person gave you this outlet of speaking openly to you and you to her. A kind human being who understood you needed the care, tenderness and sincerity in order to get up in the morning, greet the sun, to be positive and maybe lend an ear to someone who wanted understanding as well. Whoever this angel is, I bless her. Hugs to you Harry and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 8/4/2022 2:39:00 PM
Harry, I am so proud of you getting the POTD. My congratulations to one of the kindest poets here! Belated but my best to you. Panagiota XXX
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Date: 8/3/2022 5:08:00 PM
back seeing you got POTD on this one. Wow, way to go.
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Date: 8/2/2022 5:36:00 AM
A very deep and soul felt poem Harry. Parts of your poem resonated with me. Congratulations on POTD. Cheers my friend :-)
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Date: 7/28/2022 6:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. Very creative way to go with it. I haven't heard the or read the saying "will-o'the-wisp in a long time. Good to see something so different from you today. Your visit to my page was compelling. Sara
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Date: 7/27/2022 4:50:00 PM
I'm back with congratulations on your fine poem being given POTD honors. Great work, my friend. ;)
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Date: 7/27/2022 6:54:00 AM
The choice is ours, isn't it?! Congrats on your angelic POTD, Harry! Light and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 7/26/2022 1:47:00 PM
I hope that light continues to fill the darkness you have shared in your moving poem Harry. This inspires the heart. Congratulations on having this wonderful haibun honored with POTD my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/26/2022 7:05:00 AM
Harry , This is beautiful… you have rewoven such a heartfelt jewel here . I love you can build on the positivity, armed with love and care . Yes one can . The gift is twofold . You and the people you give to received the gifts which feed the inner soul. Hugs and congratulations for POTD! Susan :)
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Date: 7/25/2022 8:00:00 PM
"rise everyday and live, give something of yourself." Sometimes we need a little push. It is a wonderful feeling knowing, that so many around us care. This is tender and beautiful, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Harry, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/25/2022 5:33:00 PM
An angel guiding you to the light, Congrats on POTD Harry
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Date: 7/25/2022 3:47:00 PM
Or rise everyday with the perpetual sun and live, what a beautiful eternal verse you have penned, it should go down in history dear Harry, loved ever word
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Date: 7/25/2022 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Harry! Fine phrasing and feeling. Sometimes a soft sincere voice of encouragement is all it takes to lift us back into the fresh air! Robert
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Date: 7/25/2022 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, Harry. A powerful poem - truly inspiring. Always look forward to reading your poignant poems. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 7/25/2022 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD harry horseman! The holy spirit, your character held, all along. A walk-about, words of righteous meaning, make sense now. A kind spirit who would teach him about a positive perspective, and life's worth! Like Yolanda said, a ravishing piece, prithee please more! ~Anaya
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Date: 7/25/2022 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations for your great POTD Harry :)
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Date: 7/25/2022 1:33:00 PM
Wow this is a very lovely piece ravishing I want more..
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Date: 7/25/2022 1:19:00 PM
oh my, such a powerful poem, harry. Very well written, my friend. A wonderful inspiring message.
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Date: 7/25/2022 10:15:00 AM
Great write, Harry, a time of sadness changed by a few positive words spoken by a friend. Congratulations on POTD. Many blessings dear friend
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Date: 7/25/2022 10:13:00 AM
"Lie down my friend" "defeated, and die" " Or rise everyday with the perpetual sun"..."give something of yourself ".... Loved this... Exquisite write Harry... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/25/2022 9:23:00 AM
Nicely done, Harry. Congratulations on your Poem of the Day!
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Date: 7/25/2022 8:28:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Have a very blessed day/week.................
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Date: 7/25/2022 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your deep POTD! Life has its ups and downs but we never give up! Kudos..... :)Paulette
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Date: 7/25/2022 7:55:00 AM
Harry, What a beautiful rendition of life's trials ~ it crushes, walks on ~ then gives us a gift. I'm faving your lovely poem.
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