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Someone New

Is it true? Can it be? You do not feel the same for me. I thought you loved me, I thought you cared; I thought you said you would always be there. I guess it is true that you have moved on, you found someone to take my place, someone you can talk to all night while the world is asleep and I am out of sight. I miss being the one who made you laugh, even at the dumbest things, I hope one day you see my love was always true. I tried to show you every day, but you found someone new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 5:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2010 9:00:00 PM
I fine narrative
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Date: 4/15/2010 8:50:00 PM
I like this poem a lot. It is very lovely. I can also relate to it. You did a wonderful job. Keep it up.
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Date: 4/15/2010 6:12:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:40:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:12:00 PM
Interesting love loss poem..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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