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Someone

I so enjoy spending time with----Everyone I love the way my friends anticipate my----Needs They have a way of making me feel like a-----Someone In this or the next world, what could be better than ---That It just makes me feel so good that someone --------------Cares There are those that like to bring others down, what's that---About I have absolutely no desire to spend any time with----------Them I've seen how they make you question who you------------Are That is the last thing in the world I want for-------------You You do not deserve to be treated like----------------That Because, to me you are a special------------Someone For Hgarvey's End Word contest.

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James Inman

Date: 11/12/2015 11:16:00 AM

Great layout and wonderful words, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 11:17:00 AM

Thanks James.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2015 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your clever interpretation of the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thanks Joyce.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/5/2015 2:57:00 PM

Love this Richard a deserving win my friend!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thanks Michael.

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:19:00 PM

Love the ending message, leading to a question. Richard, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thanks SKAT.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2015 11:18:00 PM

Congrats on huge win Richard with this superb write!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/5/2015 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/4/2015 2:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win and circle of freinds :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/4/2015 11:19:00 AM

This is not an easy form, Richard. You not only managed it with ease, but also left a positive message to go with it. Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Paul, I appreciate the kind comment.

Samiha Zubair

Date: 8/27/2015 11:15:00 AM

Its a very nice write. Good luck for the contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 3:43:00 PM

Thanks Samiha, sorry for the late reply.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/18/2015 9:10:00 PM

Dear Richard, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my contest. Superb Quill. You have been moved to the next round. Congratulations. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2015 12:05:00 PM

Thanks for adding me to the winners list. How might I have improved upon this piece?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/19/2015 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for moving me to the next round HG.

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/15/2015 8:57:00 AM

Answers in question two in one, beautiful art of your expression, exquisite. 7+ i feel, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 9:06:00 AM

Thanks kind sir!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/14/2015 7:12:00 AM

Great! Your message is like a big hug...*hugs*

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks, what a great comment! Hugs back to you Casarah.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/14/2015 6:33:00 AM

wow Richard! this is really wonderful! beautiful, heartfelt sentiment, strikes home with the reader....jimbo

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2015 8:32:00 AM

I'm glad it resonates, thanks Jim.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/13/2015 11:17:00 PM

Wonderful poem n the fine message within Richard! Gl in contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Upma.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2015 5:58:00 PM

wonderful message Richard - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:14:00 PM

Hugs and thanks back to you Jan.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/13/2015 3:11:00 PM

There is no need to be hateful or mean...It is nice to have friends that care....good luck in the contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:16:00 PM

Some can't seem to stop themselves.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/13/2015 2:35:00 PM

OH!!! I just no got that special ending, Richard! :) I guess I'm a little slow. ;) This is fabulous...I really really like it. Hugs...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:17:00 PM

You are definitely not slow.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 8/13/2015 12:46:00 PM

Yes ,I am that someone who cares... Incredibly penned ,Rick!! :O) great job! ^_^

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:24:00 PM

Thanks, it's great having people that care.

Theresa Cw

Date: 8/13/2015 11:29:00 AM

Wow, simply marvelous poem you've penned Richard. Guess I'm going to have to try writing one someday. You're one very gifted poet. Thanks for sharing and wishing you the best in the contest.... Theresa

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:25:00 PM

Thanks for the good luck and thoughtful comment.

Mama Bear

Date: 8/13/2015 10:16:00 AM

Love the way you did this. Very creative. Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:26:00 PM

Thanks, I love you too mom.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/13/2015 10:09:00 AM

SUPERB writing my friend. Had not seen that contest . A great entry...A7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2015 8:27:00 PM

Thanks Robert, much appreciated.