Get Your Premium Membership

Somenight

A shifting affection has captured her sleep Standing there on his tiptoes there's the man of her dreams. In his smile there's emotion,a solace that she seeks On his lips there is silence,his warm hand on her cheek. His sweet breath trails so softly along the nape of her neck His fingers trace a line sliding down her small back. His faint gaze upon her face veiled the glow in her eyes A letter on her pillow-case declared love and goodbyes. Mr.sandman had come to her with no dust to blind Instead He was gentle and ever so kind. Their hearts have touched lightly but thoughts mingled deep She wondered if somenight He'll re-visit the suite and lay down beside her on fresh linen sheets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/15/2017 3:10:00 PM
This reads as a love poem with sensual overtones that are reinforced with superb use of imagery. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Emile. #7
Login to Reply
Date: 5/11/2017 11:46:00 PM
Now thats romance!!! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/11/2017 4:46:00 PM
Lovely and romantic, Charmaine, I enjoyed the poem ~*
Login to Reply
Chircop Avatar
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/11/2017 4:50:00 PM
Thanks so much dear friend .
Date: 5/11/2017 4:34:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , lovely write romantic to the core , Mr.sandman sing me a song:))
Login to Reply
Chircop Avatar
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/11/2017 4:50:00 PM
My first reply was for Victor..bit it kanga rooed up here...Sorry.Many thanks for reading.Happy you liked it... I Know that song and love it.. :).
Chircop Avatar
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/11/2017 4:47:00 PM
I just wished to show Mr.Sandman in a positive light for once...So what about Dreams..Mr.Sandman and love :).Thanks for reading dear friend.
Date: 5/11/2017 2:21:00 PM
Very beautiful with a hint of sadness...loved the flow of this Charma
Login to Reply
Chircop Avatar
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/11/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thanks so much for your support on my poetry Tim.
Date: 5/11/2017 2:19:00 PM
Passionate write, Charmaine. "To dream, perchance, to dream."
Login to Reply
Chircop Avatar
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/11/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Daniel for your lovely comment.Welcome back.
Date: 5/11/2017 1:37:00 PM
Falling in love with the man of her dreams who sadly is only found in her dreams. But, those dreams are so wonderful. This is beautiful my sweet friend, such a sensual and loving poem. Here's hoping all of her dreams come true
Login to Reply
Chircop Avatar
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/11/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for your constant support on my simple scribbles Chris.I really appreciate it...I fixed the last lines..and hope when it is read it flows better now.A big thankyou.:)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things