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Somebody Save Me

Somebody save me.

I'm so far down in the shadowy deep,
Please, somebody just drag me to shore,
Right before I take my eternal sleep,
Because I just can't breathe anymore.

Somebody save me.

Suddenly, in goes the cold knife,
With such an unimaginable pain,
Then out flows all the warm life,
Please, don't let this memory remain.

Somebody save me.

I'm standing right in front of you,
So, why is it that you don't see me,
The reaper is coming closer, too,
I need an angel to set me free.

Somebody save me.

Take me someplace safe and warm,
Out of the darkness of the night,
Hold me, shield me from the storm,
Stay here with me until morning's light.

Somebody save me.

This can't be how my life ends,
I will never be able to stop crying,
It is all over before it begins,
Slowly, I can feel my heart dying.

Somebody save me.

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, You need saved, you've come to the right place. Saving the damsels is a Dark Man's job. Another exceptional write Kelly. Once again you tug at the heartstrings. One can actually feel the anguish that your words invoke. It is such a good write that one can but say, "I will save you anytime you feel you need saved." You have such an emotional pool within you. Your pen is indeed gold my friend. It's Christmashere in Scotland so Merry Christmas Kelly. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 12/27/2013 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Mike! We all need someone to look out for us, and to be there when we need them...I write with a lot of emotion, because I believe that true poetry should come from the heart and the soul...I have always wanted to travel to Scotland. I hope that I get the chance someday. I hope that you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Kelly I will save you from all these bad things you have written. You tugged at my heartstrings and made me sad with these horrific and intense words, that display so much sorrow and pain. Thanks for the awesome and sweet comment on my Drinking and Sensitivity poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 5:08:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, It was well worth perusing your poems for. Each word was a pain I felt. You are a great writer....peter

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..The stanzas have great rhythm, flow and rhyme..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments on my work "Thick Fog" were one way the poem could be interperted..Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:42:00 AM
    You don't post any poetry that will not pass the test of time. I can see that you practice the write, rewrite and rewrite again style of composing. Great work, dear Kelly, I'm no longer astonished by your talent... I have come to expect nothing les than perfection.... You control the bar of judgment for all of us..... Jake

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Very emotional; I felt everything as I was reading. You touched me with your words; thanks for sharing this! :)

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Were you rock'in out to Cinderella when you wrote this? Ha-ha... That's what it reminds me of. A very sad and touching story.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 4:43:00 PM