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A lush A hot tomato Full of bourbon Holding up a bar stool Cigarette between her fingers Manicured nails meant to kill And I’m on a bender And hell bent Smoky crushed velvet James Bond would be so proud A jazz quartet is swinging To a heroin crowd Sunglasses in the night The brother is so cool A nicotine queen Is filing in between Bartender named Lloyd Says my money’s no good Drinks are on the house They know I’ll pay in cocaine When we slide on out the back “What was that?” she says “A double Jack straight up?” No mixers for me I’m drinking for the buzz It takes a lot of booze to kill The memories of you And pretend I’m someone else.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2013 7:22:00 PM
Nice flavorful poem. Imagine how distructive people are when they are attracted to wrong type of people in wrong environments.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/21/2013 6:58:00 PM
Jennifer, thank you for you comment. I appreciate you reading my work. ~Kilmer
Date: 10/18/2013 7:43:00 PM
The last three lines are poignant for me, it's like you wrote what I feel... love this
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Date: 10/18/2013 8:18:00 PM
Thanks Rachael. I am happy and sad at the same time. I hope that your life is better is better for I know that being someone else is no fun. ~Kilmer
Date: 10/18/2013 12:34:00 PM
This is the scene I saw at the "Sardine Can" in Vallejo!
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/18/2013 7:13:00 PM
Bingo! I witnessed it in Finland. ~Kilmer
Date: 9/30/2013 4:34:00 PM
Superb imagery and content. Captivated all the way through. Awesome.
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Date: 9/24/2013 3:21:00 PM
Onetime Kalakuta Republic! Lagos.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/24/2013 6:51:00 PM
Really! Interesting. Thanks Gerald...I think! :)
Date: 9/24/2013 5:05:00 AM
Nice character sketch with similies, Stephen
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/24/2013 6:52:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Mehta. You are a true scholar and gentleman. ~ Kilmer

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