Get Your Premium Membership

Some Time In a Meadow

Stopping at a little meadow by the road To rest and watch the busy swallows fly Summer fading ,feeling the pull of autumn Hearing again the geese's mournful cry Brown and gold the carpet before me The leaves dropping in colorful disarray I have the urge to gather them to my breast And remember forever this unique display Now the years are rushing with abandon So many more behind me than ahead The meadow will be here after I am gone With this years beauty safely put to bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/13/2011 10:48:00 AM
Barbara! Congrats on two of your enchanting poems making in the first round of the competition. Wish you a grand success in the finals. -Mohammad
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Barbara. I like this one the best. Love Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2011 3:43:00 PM
just wonderful I love it so much I want it to birth a sonnet only 2 more lines to a sonnet;) BIG congrad's on your Soup Site win on to round 2! Light & love
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2011 12:35:00 PM
Many congrats on your two first round successes Barbara - luv Janette
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2011 10:42:00 AM
good to see your great result here Barbara.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2011 9:25:00 AM
marvellous feeling to the story...images are memorable such as "colorful disarray" and "pull of autumn"......this is MY kind of poem I love it.....good luck in the SOUP contest Barbara
Login to Reply
Date: 3/6/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congrats BG on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Barbara, on this wonderful piece on the featured page....gives us hope for a warmer season! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congrats BG, on this beautiful piece being featured. Vince
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your "featured poem" Barbara. This poem is so ~ PRETTY AND ENCHANTING~
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 5:00:00 AM
Charming write, Barb. Great pastoral quality. Congrats on the selection. Love,Dave
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2011 3:51:00 PM
what a lovely piece, congrats on having it featured this week
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congrats BG on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv my friend..
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2010 3:18:00 PM
What a gem you have written Barbara. Meadow has a lovely innocence to it >> James :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2010 12:27:00 PM
what a pleasant poem. as we put to bed the past years, we know in our hearts that we influenced the process, hopefully adding the dimensions of beauty, love and meaning to something only physical. thank you, chuck
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2010 4:38:00 PM
Really lovely..I enjoyed it very much..Take care~Deb
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2010 4:04:00 PM
Barbara, the older we get the faster the years pass. Psychologists say this is because each year is a shorter portion of the life we've known. You used terrific imagery to convey your message, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things