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Some Nerve

Who are you to question my authority Who are you totell me How things supposed to be Who are you to pass judgement and Don't even observe If you ask me I think you have Some Nerve Who are you to tell me what I need to do Who are you to say my heart is not true Who are you to think that You can have the last word If you ask me I think you have Some Nerve

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2010 9:06:00 AM

HI, Faleshia, I enjoyed reading this one. Luv, Andrea

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/1/2010 5:53:00 AM

Ms esther ms esther this poem was for a friend having problems with her man I have no time or thought to waste on you You so fast to jump all over people stuff ain't nobdy thinking about you but if you want a piece of me than bring it you low class low value stink weak trash bag that will get disposed of faleshia

Brian Strand

Date: 4/1/2010 12:26:00 AM

Easter greetings Faleshia thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/31/2010 11:26:00 PM

judgment come and go upon us, if we give it wood, it will surely spark. But sometimes that spark gives us fire too. I don't mind this fight, I like to watch the view. But don't get razzled, you still dazzle, your still cool in these parts :P

Amy Green

Date: 3/31/2010 9:20:00 PM

Faleshia- Block Sybil (Stephanie, Sylvia, Esther) from commenting on your poems. You will not have any more problems from that lunatic.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/31/2010 9:04:00 PM

Nice job, Faleshia. Very true. Don't worry about Esther she has a problem telling the difference between a dairy and a poem. Have you read any of her dairys?

Amy Green

Date: 3/31/2010 7:09:00 PM

Faleshia, don't you just want to say this to all "nay sayers"? Bosses, judging assh***. You are correct and this was a very good, and very true poem. Ignore Sybil.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2010 6:43:00 PM

Block Ms. Esther in all her forms. She's the one who has "Some Nerve."

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2010 6:39:00 PM

Well said, Faleshia. Keep standing up for yourself and your talent will take you far! Love, Carolyn