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SOME LIKE IT HOT!

 

I love an old movie called "Some Like It Hot" Two guys from a jazz band, had witnessed a plot! Their lives might expire from gangster's gunfire They ran like the dickens without getting shot! They're quick to leave town, while they try to compose... With tricks of their own, before anyone knows! With wigs on their heads and lipsticks of red ……. They're wearing silk undies, and new pantyhose! They land a new job... (Not a word to the wise!), while dressed as two chicks, as an artful disguise But surprise takes a twist when they cannot resist a marriage proposal, and a boat full of lies!! Romance in the "20's" was stranger than not! Bootleggers and gangster's would stir up the pot The plot only thickens The pace of it quickens, when they find true love on a millionaire's yacht! _________________________________________________ 3/16/18 For "Favorite Comedy Movie" contest Sponsored by Alexis Y

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Date: 5/22/2018 11:27:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful cute write .I loved this movie.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/20/2018 9:11:00 PM
Well done, Carrie. Congrats on your top win with this fabulous tribute to a wonderful movie.
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Date: 5/20/2018 8:25:00 PM
That was a funny movie!...Congrats on your win Carrie
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Date: 5/20/2018 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. Mick
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:45:00 PM
Back for congrats!
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie, thoroughly enjoyed your well written string of limericks excellent choice of film. :))
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:05:00 PM
what a fabulous film story you portrayed in limerick form. Many congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this well-written fun movie limerick.!
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:16:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Tony Curtis and Jack Lemon were hilarious in this film. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/22/2018 9:09:00 PM
Haha! This is such a witty and wonderful recap of the movie, Carrie. Your charming and rhythmic limericks are a joy to read! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/29/2018 12:15:00 PM
Well done, Carrie! You draw us into the plot!
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:28:00 PM
Every part of this poem was a delight to read; I could not help wondering - did you recently re-watch this movie? I have not seen it for years, but know you have captured it beautiful, and in limerick form too. I think limericks are the most difficult poem to write, yet this one makes it seem effortless.
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Date: 3/18/2018 5:46:00 PM
what a pleasure seeing you write again, carrie... and with this downright hilarity, you are on top... apill ink!... miss your poetry.. huggs
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Date: 3/18/2018 9:55:00 AM
Ha! Great sense of humour, nice to see this side of you Carrie... Hope you are well...
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Date: 3/18/2018 2:44:00 AM
Great poem for a great film, Carrie, will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/18/2018 9:51:00 AM
This old movie is a keeper...even after all these years ! Thanks for stopping for a look, Viv !
Date: 3/17/2018 11:39:00 PM
Limericks are so difficult to do yet you managed to string three of them so well. Awesome penning, dear Carrie. Bravo.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/18/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Line ! I'm a big fan of the golden oldies ...!! This was fun to watch and write !!
Date: 3/17/2018 11:37:00 PM
This is so good. Delight delight delight! Already a winner with me :) xomo!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/18/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen. Such a nice comment of encouragement !!
Date: 3/17/2018 9:43:00 PM
This would make the perfect trailer for this movie. Excellent poetry, Carrie. I love that it is a limerick.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/18/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Daniel !! This old comedy, was a limerick waiting to happen !! LOL !!
Date: 3/17/2018 9:06:00 PM
Wow Carrie!!! what I appreciate most about your charming sequence limerick is the absolute "note perfect" timing of your lines! ba-dum-ba-dum-da-bum....badadada-bum-de-bum! every line without a mis-step...easy out loud, great story...best I have seen in some time!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/17/2018 9:20:00 PM
What a kind comment, James !! As one who I consider an expert poet, I'm pleased that you liked this silly poem! (I haven't done a lot of limericks....It was kind of fun for a change)!

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