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Some Kind of Cleopatra

She could be ---- whatever she wanted to be..... Cause the seas mighty with storm to scorn the shores of whorish men, and descend them to depths forlorn, or lift their wee-dignity, conspired aloft blue-sky-spires; Spiraling to the bosom of some fresh heaven ---- they shall see their folly for the loveliness in her eyes, and await her kiss a thousand years; Reflect soft scented meadows, and a heart from which flows the waterfall ---- roaring in glory of darling truth, and steadfast honesty, The wickedness of men..... cannot endure a glimpse, a mere peek upon her gaze..... The desert winds whirl the dune seas, of Octavian mischief; And whip they throughout the ages, beyond time, Octavian crushed neath her timeless allure.... He always the 'great' villain, and she the beauteous Queen Are good men and 'great' men of the same kind? seldom are 'great' men good, and good men 'great' Christ was born in a lowly manger ---- the King of kings, and too many a 'king' born in plush luxury, But Cleopatra took her life for love, though born of unsurpassed beauty, she was not tainted with the thirst of power, or hungry like a selfish dog ---- to appease a frail appetite, But supreme as a thorn-bird's undying love; many a wold (rolling plains), dipped in honeyed ease, the glory of gold, and likeness of her Essence(d) in the weave of high-romance, Cleopatra.... Whom the masses of men lay mystified in her elegant recollection, majestic, for her affections ---- The Valley of the Kings kneel in her shadow.... she is beautiful, for her love..... Whom she may be called (both good and great) She could be, whatever she wanted to be.....

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Date: 3/30/2014 10:09:00 AM
I decided to read this because I love Cleopatra, I have since I was a kid. Her strength and beauty are inspiring, so is this beautiful poetry, ripe with wonderful imagery. I loved this. This is a really beautiful piece of work. One of my favs for sure.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/30/2014 10:14:00 AM
Thanks joanna, I'm glad it helps inspiration, the idea is that love rules, love is true power! Cleopatra I think symbolized that, I too am very fond of her I hope it helps you enjoy your Sunday!
Date: 3/29/2014 3:37:00 PM
Hi Keith, Cleopatra's beauty has long been the allure for men, whether they have loving or just lustful intentions. In a way, your poem makes me feel sorry for her. Women want to be loved for who they are, not just what is on the outside. Very profound poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2014 12:18:00 PM
- History does not change that much - when we talk about great men and beautiful women ... and love :) - A fantastic well written and interesting poem Keith! - I have a poem on the same theme: (03/18/2012) - (Page 3) - The Fabulous Queen Of Egypt - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:19:00 PM
You paint her so romantically. I hope she was even half of what you said about her here. Lovely portrayal.
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:52:00 AM
Cool.. I love the history and the mystery surrounding this woman. Your words are really well penned in this one-- topic to format and expression... "The desert winds whirl the dune seas, of Octavian mischief; And whip they throughout the ages, beyond time, Octavian crushed neath her timeless allure...." Just.... WOW !!
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Date: 3/28/2014 6:15:00 AM
Her love both good and great...So difficult to be both,but indeed Her love was all that could be.I really loved this..Made me wanna see Cleoptra's movie again.
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:39:00 AM
Another wonderful write...love your word play!
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:01:00 AM
You appear to have fathomed Cleopatra's character with such ease and superb choice of words...and that's why some talk about her in the present, not the past. // paul
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/27/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Paul! I watched the movie again ----(Elizabeth Taylor) with a friend; we were so blown away, the acting and everything, and yes --- I could almost feel her spirit right with me somehow as I wrote. Thanx a million Paul!
Date: 3/27/2014 10:55:00 AM
Wow... Good job. I've read that Cleopatra was the only Egyptian ruler born of Macedonian blood. (7)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/27/2014 11:10:00 AM
Many thanks, I did not know she was of Macedonian descent.... interesting! Glad you enjoyed it! (her)!

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