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From horizon to zenith's point and then to Crimson dusk he moved While I kept watching leaves turning hues which now swim on blue water (Two lines poetry challenge) 22nd September, 2020

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Date: 12/5/2020 10:40:00 PM
I do not recognise this contest but I'm sure you could not get a place. Why did you not date the poem? All contests must be dated. Which is a pity for you wrote a great two liner.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/8/2021 2:29:00 AM
I added date later... Thanks to my insta page
Date: 12/3/2020 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful imagery .
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/3/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Jenn

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