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Sombre Mines

The mines have taken my strength taken my sight and taken my breathe Crawl to the light I cannot, thus my Energy Nor will I see the light before I die I am hopeless.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/13/2010 9:04:00 AM
always stay hopefyl my friend, its the only thing we have in ths life!!!
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Date: 12/18/2009 2:35:00 PM
Is it the diamond mines you write of? Then again, I guess any kind of mining would fit this outstanding write. Thanks so much for your comment on my writing and if it hasn't already been said, Welcome to PoetrySoup Nasilele!!
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Date: 12/6/2009 9:56:00 AM
Sad piece John! I hope someday you will come to find that you are not without hope as long as you are alive! We all struggle with something but we try to carry out cross and hope in God to help us. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/5/2009 7:52:00 PM
very sad ...Light & Love and BIG HUG!
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