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SOLSTICE SENRYU

A sunny corner Dandelions, hair gone gray In a spiked farewell A howling wind An ogre trimming its beard A solstice shadow Nipping and sipping A scattering of empties Dancing in the snow Rainbows of promise Stained glass shadows in the snow Promises broken Christmas promises Lacking the honesty of A raggedy angel Visible presents Old dogs covered with tinsel Toothless chew toys

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Date: 12/1/2023 4:34:00 PM
a nice string on senyrus. I especially liked the 3d one. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
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Date: 12/1/2023 11:46:00 AM
Delightful
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Date: 12/1/2023 10:40:00 AM
Especially love number 4!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/1/2023 10:49:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by my senryu shop Kim.

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