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Solitude By the Reverie

My mind a dislodged leaf floats away on the quiet stream of dreams from cacophony of life to a distant placid cobalt lake soaking the azure dust of the sparkling sky. On the banks stand the petrified trees for the stilled branches don’t sway, their shadows on the lake are unruffled for the squall has stopped to blow. The motionless mist hangs, a veil of dense solitude, until the clouds descend and melt it away. The drops of rain pierce the water, dissipate the pain of the broken heart in radiating ripples that disappear in the calm water poised unperturbed. They take my mind behind the shroud of stillness to the serene shade of solitude on the banks of the flowing dreams. I plunge and dive deep within, see my dreams weave at lonely depth the tapestry of profound bliss for my soul. May 31, 2018.

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Date: 7/5/2018 8:27:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Subimal! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 7/4/2018 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/5/2018 12:40:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/4/2018 9:57:00 PM
Well penned, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/5/2018 12:40:00 AM
Thank you, Line for visiting.
Date: 7/4/2018 5:10:00 AM
Congrats on a good win Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/5/2018 12:40:00 AM
Thank you, Mohan.
Date: 6/16/2018 10:30:00 PM
Lovely imagery. Congrats on you top win, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2018 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 6/8/2018 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/11/2018 1:10:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 6/8/2018 8:15:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/11/2018 1:10:00 AM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise.
Date: 6/8/2018 7:33:00 AM
wow! The imagery alone stands out. The metaphors are outstanding as well. Amazing poem sweet Subimal!thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you, Laura.
Date: 5/31/2018 2:29:00 PM
This is gorgeous, Subimal! Loved your masterful weave of words, creating emotive imagery! A fave! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/6/2018 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for your visit and for appreciating the poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/6/2018 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for your visit and for appreciating the poem.

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