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Author's Notes: This particular write, entitled: "Solitude" is a "Accentual Meter" type of poem. (I classified this poem in PoetrySoup under "Free Verse" since this type of accentual metered write is not normally listed under the PS classification pick-list.) This poem is quite interesting as it sums up of some of my specialized ideas and views on Solitude. We all need time -- now and then -- to ourselves to contemplate events, issues, and things in our respective lives. Enjoy this write and this particular poetic format!! (Gary Bateman, January 27, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

Categories: allegory, image, inspiration, introspection, metaphor, self, and spiritual.

Accentual Meter Calculation and Notes:

Parameters (3 to 6 Syllables per verse)

Range: 5 x 3 = 15 (min) / 5 x 6 = 30 (max)

Total Syllables = 129 (Out of 180 Syllables maximum possible)

Total Words = 77

Total Verses = 30

("How Many Syllables Counter" was used for syllable confirmation for both automated and manual syllable counts and cross-check.)

Solitude Walking alone Often outside In deep thought About things of Great importance. I wonder aloud Thoughts amassed Priorities now Solutions not clear Seeking inspiration. Time’s fleeting Which is always Tied to many Dynamic actions Begging resolution. I stop now— And look heavenward Solutions abound Choices are difficult I’m staying focused. Use my intuition Request divine help Do Nothing Take your pick Nothing’s easy. My soul’s focus Trust yourself— First and foremost God speaks silently Do it now! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, (January 27, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/31/2015 9:39:00 AM

Love this poem to which I can relate; I often feel the need to be alone with my thoughts, away from it all; sought solitude is lovely and beneficial...nothing compared with enforced solitude! Good luck with your book. Have a nice weekend my friend. #7 // paul

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/31/2015 10:39:00 AM

Paul, Thanks so much for your very gracious comments here. Yes -- I'm the same way too when it comes to "solitude." It certainly helps for one to get away and clear the air at times (especially for us writers)!! I'll keep you posted on my book. I've been told it will be available by May-June 2015. I'll be glad to have this book task behind me!! Much work. Have a super weekend. Best Always, Gary

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/29/2015 7:42:00 PM

A most powerful poem here! I love the lesson it teaches us..."Time’s fleeting Which is always Tied to many Dynamic actions Begging resolution." That's my favorite stanza. Whenever I sit down to read one of your poems, I am in awe... Amazing...keep up the incredible work.. Always, Laura

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/30/2015 6:05:00 PM

Hello Laura!! Thanks so much for your most gracious comments on and read of "Solitude." I'm so glad that you liked it. I will take a look at your latest poems here while I have some time. I haven't forgotten you either. Many of us are all so busy. And I do understand that!! (I like what you said above about your "favorite stanza.") (I will be offline with "PS" during February as I'm getting my poetry finalized right now for my publisher for book I will have on the street by May-June this year. You might like it!!) Best Weekend Wishes!! Gary

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/29/2015 4:54:00 PM

Bravo, well penned.

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/30/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thanks ML!! (I was surprised about the POTD selection, which is how those things usually go, but I'm both humbled and gratified that my poem was selected.) All The Best!! Gary

David Meade

Date: 1/29/2015 1:35:00 PM

Well, I am late to the party but I am glad I showed up . . . love this poem and the style . . . you captured many of my thoughts . . . as you may know, Greenleaf, as I walk in solitude I listen to the trees . . . outstanding my dearest friend. 7

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/30/2015 5:55:00 PM

Hello David!! I am very pleased that you enjoyed this particular poem. (I have missed our regular back-and-forth comments of late.) Thanks for your gracious thoughts and certainly for the "7" too!! I will probably be away from Poetry Soup for a few weeks during February until I've completed the book submittals to my publisher. (I have recorded your address as well for when my book comes out -- thanks!!) Keep "Solitude" in mind during your walks outside. Best Always My Friend, "Greenleaf."

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/28/2015 7:17:00 PM

congratulations gary on poem of the day well deserved pal

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/30/2015 5:48:00 PM

Thanks Liam Mate!! I really appreciate your comment here!! I'm just now trying to get caught up. (I sent you an e-mail this evening 30 January, by the way.) Our local computer and phone service was disrupted the other day due to the big snow storm we had here in Northern Germany. Back online now!! Best Wishes for the Weekend!! Gary

Tim Smith

Date: 1/28/2015 4:35:00 PM

Ah...in had that walk myself last night...congrats on being featured

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thanks Tim!! I had no idea my selection made it since I was having computer problems earlier today. Glad you identify with this write. Best Always, Gary

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/28/2015 1:07:00 PM

Yes...this was lovely. Congrats on being POTD, Gary. :) Happy for you. Hugs

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:02:00 PM

Thanks Eileen!! I am honored so by your comments!! Best Always, Gary

Eve Roper

Date: 1/28/2015 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Gray. God words or hard to hear Eve

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:04:00 PM

Eve, Thanks!! It's always better when we can hear "Him." Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2015 7:43:00 AM

- The poem of the day is the highest rated poem, Gary ! - Congratulations well deserved :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:06:00 PM

Anne-Lise My Dear Friend . . . Thanks so much!! One never really knows when this honor will be bestowed. Surprise!! Hope you enjoyed this special metered write. Best Always, Gary

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 7:36:00 AM

I love your poem of solitude and contemplation...life brings so much stress and decisions. We need quiet moments alone with God to recharge and find answers...so well written, Gary. Big congrats on be chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:09:00 PM

Rhonda, Thanks so much!! You're right about Stress and Decisions. We all do need that certain "solitude" and "reflection" with God -- so important!! Glad you liked this particular write. Best Always, Gary

Jean Omalley Polatnick

Date: 1/28/2015 7:33:00 AM

LOVE this ... honestly ... intuition is God's nudge!!! Totally enjoyed ... Thanks and congrats on POTD!!

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:14:00 PM

Thanks Jean -- I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem!! Best Wishes, Gary

James Horn

Date: 1/28/2015 6:23:00 AM

You missed one thing and part. A deep snow which turned me into a mean so and so, so I started writing poems. Thank you so, so, so very much so we should stay in touch. Jim Horn PS. Quite a provocative poem whatever that will and may mean. (PP-WW-MM).

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:13:00 PM

Hello Jim -- thanks for your read and visit. I'm glad my work stimulated so thought -- which is what everything we do is mostly about. Best Always, Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/28/2015 3:00:00 AM

Wise words Gary. We are always inspired by you. Yes this is primarily a question of trust that should be considered in the first place."Know Thyself" /"Trust Thyself" then God will be your closest friend.The bottom-line : we must prioritize God better say God first as our great sages had told eons ago. Love Gary and Ingrid. Praying to God for your success in your future endeavors.God bless Gary. Your friend rajat

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:18:00 PM

Thanks so much Rajat my dear friend!! You are quite right by what you mention about God and our human relationship with most omnipotent cosmic force!! Glad you enjoyed this write. (I had no idea that "Solitude" was POTD until I came online this late PM.) Best Always Rajat from Ingrid and me!! Gary

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/27/2015 7:53:00 PM

Gary, what a beautiful poem you have here. It reflects what people should do whether contemplating a life changing decision...or simply trying to find a solution to an enigma. We step back, soak into God's presence, for in the silence...he speaks. Thank you dear friend. I have missed reading your wise words and hope to visit more frequently now. Hope everything's going smoothly with your book...A 7 and a fav. Kim :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:24:00 PM

Hello Kim . . . Thanks so much for your most gracious comments here!! I'm glad you liked this particular poem. (I wrote this one as a test run using the "Accentual Meter" format.) God's presence is truly important to each and every one of us!! Thanks for the 7 and FAV. (In February, I will probably be off-line with Poetry Soup while I finish all the tasks I have on my book with the Publish, but I will resurface for sure in early March!!) Best Always, Gary

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2015 7:16:00 PM

We are human and therefore we cry, sometimes with unabashed openness and sometimes in quiet solitude. Great work spurring deep thought! Emile.

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:32:00 PM

Thanks so much Emile!! Glad liked this particular poem -- and I like what you say about being human -- it's all quite true. Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/27/2015 5:21:00 PM

very beautifully painted golden ink flowing in this gary excellent pen

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:35:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! The Leprechauns made me do this write!! Don't tell anyone!! I'm pleased you enjoyed it Mate. Best Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/27/2015 2:10:00 PM

Hello Gary! A very beautiful pen ! A 7 +++for you! I like this very peaceful and serene poem full of much reflections about life issues and of things that happens around our lives everyday, my dearest friend Gary. Yes, it is great to look for Gods divine guidance in our lives. He'll help you! Nothing is easy.Life can be very harsh sometimes. Your pen is truly golden! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xoxxoxx D.^O^

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:40:00 PM

Hello Dorian!! Glad you liked this particular poem. I used a different approach on this one!! Thanks too for the super seven rating. You are indeed always quite kind!! God's divine guidance is so important to all of us. Best Always My Dear Friend!! Gary

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/27/2015 1:40:00 PM

I really enjoyed this piece immensely, Gary. Yes, look above...we rarely do and we suffer for it. Thanks for sharing.

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/28/2015 6:44:00 PM

Thanks Eileen!! I'm most pleased that you liked this particular poem. (I took a different approach with this write!!) Best Wishes Always, Gary