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Solitude

SOLITUDE Walking in the midst of nothingness around Not a whistle to be heard, not a cry, not a sound An ocean of tears forcing its way Is a blessing for many, as they say The trauma, the fear of being alone Preferred anonymity, yet clearly shone The reasons to smile were now a distant reality As it always is for a hapless commodity The wires of distress so closely entwined Was it a possibility my stars would shine? The hardships, for life, I was destined to befriend It seemed would go with me to the very end As here was a lonesome entombed in calmness Where the only companion to prize was darkness Never in my dreams had it scrolled my mind That beyond my world was a world to find But why should I cry when there’s none to listen After all every beginning needs an ignition As long as I live my heart shall keep pounding As peculiar as it may seem to me astounding For the caravan of life must, surely, walk its line A line so erratic yet so sublime With life and death now merely apart The choices at hand were amazingly stark But here I was still walking against the odds In hope of Thou, I live Oh God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 8:30:00 AM
Nice tale of being alone. Well - you have your poetry soup friends, Keep up the good work! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/23/2009 12:21:00 PM
Well, it seems poetic talent runs in your family. I like the line,"the caravan of life...." Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/28/2009 11:58:00 AM
Habib! Your poem is full of gloom. It touches the heart. In verse form there are negligible rhyming imperfections in few verses. You may like to edit them. Welcome to the fraternity of PoetrySoup. I am sure you will benefit from the members' educated comments. -Mohammad
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:41:00 AM
"For the caravan of life must, surely, walk its line/ A line so erratic yet so sublime" excellent line welcome to the Soup! Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:31:00 AM
This is thrilling poetry.
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Date: 5/16/2009 10:58:00 PM
Lovely poem Habib, and a warm welcome to poetry soup, James
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Date: 5/16/2009 5:36:00 PM
Welcome to poetrysoup! You're not alone anymore!!! Great write -Alley
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