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Solitude

The secrets we tuck away, Locked within our memory, Ghostly images hover, In quiet solitude they will rise. Date: Feb. 23, 2022 For: Bite Size No. 37 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 2/27/2022 8:10:00 AM
Yes, so true ! The secrets tucked inside will rise up in quiet solitude ! A terse, meaningful write Paulette !
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Date: 2/27/2022 9:51:00 AM
Dear Valsa, glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 2/25/2022 8:38:00 AM
I assume the main reason they reason is so we can take a better look at them, put them in proper perspective and heal from the energy of understanding and forgiveness, love your luminated words of wisdom , you are deep as the ocean, :)
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Date: 2/25/2022 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for your uplifting words of praise. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 2/25/2022 7:48:00 AM
Yours words ring true Paulette! You crafted your poem in such a beautiful way, I can relate!! Happy Friday!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/25/2022 10:00:00 AM
Glad I was able to "ring true" for you! Thanks for stopping by to comment. And a Very Happy Friday to you Too! It is cold,snowy and icy here but it allows for "Solitude". :) Paulette
Date: 2/25/2022 3:59:00 AM
We are challenged by our weaknesses as it occasionally reminds us, a wondrous execution, Paula, much enjoyed, Aloha~William!
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Date: 2/25/2022 10:02:00 AM
Thanks William~I think we all have our moments in quite solitude that our memories reel out before us. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/24/2022 6:39:00 PM
'Quiet solitude' opens the door, Paulette. ~ Bubbling Subconscious Fiends
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Date: 2/25/2022 10:03:00 AM
Yes, indeed it does~the flood gates come pouring in when solitude is our companion. :)Paulette
Date: 2/24/2022 2:32:00 PM
Excellent entry, Paulette. Short but packed with words to consider. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/25/2022 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Bill~Yes, short with the intent to create a powerful poem with a message that easily is understood; without droning on and on and on. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 2/24/2022 2:22:00 PM
Yes, this can happen. Just like difficult memories rarely shared, returning in nightmares too. Well done :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/25/2022 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Heidi~when solitude becomes our companion who knows what will turn up? Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/24/2022 2:21:00 AM
Interesting and lovely Paulette...and so true...Best wishes in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank You Anita~I think we all can relate especially when we are in a place of solitude. :)Paulette
Date: 2/24/2022 12:17:00 AM
This bite size poem engages with all who have secrets we want to keep forever to ourselves to bask in our sentiments when we are alone. Very lovely Paulette. This should do well in the contest. Blessings xxoo
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/24/2022 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Connie~I enjoy creating bite-size poetry where less words carry a big impact. :)Paulette
Date: 2/23/2022 9:43:00 PM
Secrets are haunting and more when you are trying to rest. Great lines for Line's contest. Blessings
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Date: 2/24/2022 6:31:00 AM
Thank You Eve~I enjoy Bite-Size poems, they seem to hold a lot of impact. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/23/2022 6:40:00 PM
Haunting little write, Paulette~well said. Nothing is ever entirely forgotten -- not joy nor pain. We are far more ghostly images than we know, the history of mankind tucked away in our DNA.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/24/2022 6:33:00 AM
Indeed! I think it is safe to say we all share in this common melancholy of memories. :)Paulette
Date: 2/23/2022 5:37:00 PM
Oh, I like this one, Paulette! There is an air of mystery to it! Good luck with the contest! :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/24/2022 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Laura~ A mystery I think we all have tucked within us, hidden from sight. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/23/2022 9:56:00 AM
Hi Paulette, I'm seeing good entries for the contest prompt, your poem is no exception. Good piece on solitude.Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/23/2022 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Alexis~ I appreciate your support! You also have a nice day! :)Paulette

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