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Solitaire Deep within a canyon, where shadows are born, fear lives and breathes on the dark side of morn. My heart beats like thunder, my cries are in vain. Beads of sweat bathe my body in cold misty rain. Lonely are the sounds of a world lost in sleep. The grieving in my soul is running wild and deep. Tossed about am I, as a leaf blown in the wind. He left me all alone in pain I cannot transcend. Memories are my prison, without a window or door. He left me all alone, abandoned on a sunless shore. My empty arms reach out, but he's no longer there. "Come back," I plead, "I can't live a life of solitaire." Strong arms wrap around me. In fear I begin to scream. "I'm here beside you, darling. It was only a bad dream." As I clung to him I cried, "Promise you'll never let me go." "I won't leave you," he answered, " because I love you so." Lin Lane October 29, 2015 Dancing With Description~Contest

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Date: 11/12/2015 9:30:00 AM
Lin, I was awakened one night with my wife punching me because SHE dreamed I was cheating on HER....Nicely done take on the theme, congrats on the win,.
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Date: 11/12/2015 11:06:00 AM
aww, John. that was a nightmare...for both of you. Thank you.
Date: 11/10/2015 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win:)
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Date: 11/10/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Elis.
Date: 11/10/2015 11:33:00 AM
nice
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:15:00 PM
thanks
Date: 11/10/2015 7:13:00 AM
Lovely write Lin, Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:17:00 AM
Merci, James. Thanks for your visit and your sweet comment.
Date: 11/10/2015 3:50:00 AM
Really well written. I enjoyed this very much. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/10/2015 4:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Scott.
Date: 11/10/2015 1:25:00 AM
Lin, love the descriptive write and the twist you have at the end... a well-deserve top podium!!! COngrats!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:31:00 AM
Soooo many nice compliments. Thanks!
Date: 11/10/2015 12:45:00 AM
Lin congratulations on your excellent win!
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:30:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Michael.
Date: 11/9/2015 10:24:00 PM
Well done , Lin, congratulations on your win! Hugs
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:30:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. I'll take those hugs. ;)
Date: 11/9/2015 10:07:00 PM
Beautifully done, Lin, hearty congratulations from me, Viv x
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:29:00 AM
Hi, Viv. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 11/9/2015 6:27:00 PM
Well expressed haunting piece, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 11/9/2015 6:38:00 PM
Richard, thanks for your sentiments and the congratulations.
Date: 11/9/2015 5:47:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Lin!! Be blessed :) -LU
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Date: 11/9/2015 6:37:00 PM
Hi, Laura. I appreciate your remarks. ;)
Date: 11/9/2015 5:46:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Lin!! Be blessed :) -LU
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Date: 11/9/2015 5:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem of love and devotion, Lin. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/9/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Date: 10/29/2015 9:00:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Lin - Best wishes in the contest and have a great day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2015 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne Lise. I'm grateful for your well wishes.
Date: 10/29/2015 7:00:00 AM
Wow. so profound and well written. I feel the emotion. Great visuals. you are very talented. A 7. Well done best wishes. Pete.
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Peter Dome
Date: 10/29/2015 9:00:00 AM
Areal pleasure Lin. Pete. keep it up you're great.
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Date: 10/29/2015 7:39:00 AM
My deepest thanks for your kind comments, Pete.

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